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In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park

THIS IS MADE AFTER WATTPAD TRAUMATIZED ME. So to save and protect other people eyes. i took it in my hands to make a lookism fanfic. Without Any Lg Sh*T. The fanfic is pretty simple. A guy die. Guy meet Rob. Guy spin wheel. Guy gets To be A system. And gets the Perfect body Of Daniel park. Guy happy. Now the guy makes changes in the plot. He will show why Charles took interest in the second body. He will show what is the ture power of it. Wannna know what happens when you send a guy with as a system and gave him hack's. Read to find out. Welcome to my fanfic. Hope you will stick with me to the end of it.

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Chapter 44 : The heart attack.

Recap : system faced goo and tom, After a bit of fighting and couple of injuries. System took care of tom with a single Punch. And for goo system was caused a bit of trouble.

Beacuse author didn't want to use a copy of mushashi to neg goo, Thats that's.

But after Using off screen Justu, To beat goo, System gets his hands on 2 things, A sword and a guy with mine mine tendencies. And a pride and ego even bigger then mary kim during Cheoliang.

After giving him kind pleasantries words. And where to put the sword. He snapped attacking. And starting the worst day form himself. And a good day for us.

Story begins here.

The gut wrenching scream of taejin was echoing in the corridors of first affiliate.

The surgeon, zack , sleeping johan , eli. Were in the room. They saw what was happening to taejin.

They couldn't keep their eyes on it. Even when they closed it, His screams were their. Eli was not affected by the screams. But the visuals were disturbing for all the boys their.

Eli puts himself in the shoes of the masked man. Someone killed yenna, And he flaunts it Infront of him. He will also do the same.

But he is sure he will not be on par with the masked man.

Surgeon guy or the thing bro. He felt sick to his stomach. A good thing for him was that he didn't ate that day. Other wise all things would have been on floor now.

He worked with taejin for a long time and knows, taejin is smart enough to know what is best and what is bad for him.

Looking at his choices now he feels taejin asked for it. But as a friend he feels sorry for him. But as a doctor he knows taejin is done for. He will die today.

That will he best case scenario. But by any way if he survived. He will be truly living in hell.

Seeing how all this happened to him. Was truly shocking. One guy went through goo and tom. To get him. Just for a family member. If she was alive would he had done the same.

He tried replacing him in his place. But he gets no reply. Other then a image of his elder brother. The one who was kind to all. But ended up begin the one where people turned their eyes away form him.

Zack has no words other then to take johan out of the room. He doesn't want this copy paste user to copy the taejin special. And risk of it getting used on him.

He already had too much to deal with he ain't taking any chance of it. He surely doesn't want taejin special to be done on him.

While all people slowly left taejin alone, Going in different directions to explore and get the image out of their head.

But no matter where they walked or what they did the image of the place where the sword was something they couldn't get out of their head.

Now if all those povs done. We see what is the aftermath of the taejin special.

Taejin is missing all the teeths even the ones at the back ones are Missing. Blood is coming out of it. And many little peices of steel are also imbedded in his mouth.

Increasing the blood flow. Looking down we a sword stabbed between the legs. As the pickaxe and jewels are stabbed through.

Missing finger nails and having fingers pointing at an angle not possible for them. In simple lay men terms. He is ducked beyond repair. And will possibly die form blood loss.

The guy who did it. Is standing a bit far form him. Due to the smell of piss and shit coming form taejin. His suit white shirt is covered in red.

Blood coverd knuckles and dripping form fingers. System wanted to stuff nails down taejin mouth. But just when he was about to do it.

That mofo pissed and shat himself. Which caused him to get away form him. But looking at his master peice. He believes that he will 80% not live.

Even if by any miracle he lived. Walking is just a dream for him. Shattered knee and broken shin bone form 3 different places. With femar and ankle bone as free gift. To him. Better luck going to toilet.

And system now feels. He took it too far. Due to the place where sword was stabbed. System felt phantom pain. But ignored it, Beacuse he was asking for this to happen.

System feels all the anger has left him. Before he cam think of anything else. He hears a ding.

Quest completed. Entertainment of rob

You have made an impact which will never be forgot. And entertained me enough. The reward will be given when your back in your verse. Now shoo away and get back. To help friends in trouble.

Seeing the last words. System remembers before transfer. He felt some eyes on him. But he ignored thinking it was some girls. But now he understands it wasn't girl's.

So without much dealy he leaves his master peice. And heads to an place with 0 cams and 0 people to transfer.

But he forgot one thing. Og Daniel and jay were sleeping in the room where his master peice was.

Og Daniel pov.

'That was a wild dream, But what did he mean by choi coming first'. Og Daniel was awoken in his little body.

Looking around the room. He sees room in shambles and like a war just happened here. This shocks him.

As he remembers getting slammed on the ground face first like a washing cloth. So seeing no second body.

He thinks, it might be in another room. Looking around he sees jay on the ground unconscious. Running toward him.

Shaking him awake. "jay wake up are you okay, Jay Jay".

He wakes up but giving a thumbs up. Daniel feels a weight taken off his chest. Seeing awake jay.

He speaks to him "Ok seeing your okay lets look around see where are the others". Jay nods, They both get up. Looking around they see 3 figures sleeping.

Daniel and jay recognize them 2 of them. Tom , Goo and one unknown tall muscular figure similar to tom.

This shocked og Daniel. Who thoughts ' Was second body that strong. If they can't stand to him. What chance others had, We must find them quick'.

Turning to jay, Og Daniel was about to speak something. But he sees Jay's eye fixed in a direction. As jay was shaking.

Og Daniel felt his hear beating faster then ever. Praying that what ever jay was looking at. It didn't started with a B D ends at K.

Slowly turning his head. To look, Og Daniel heart jumps, He almost faints at the sight. He feels like his heart will jump out of his chest.

His eyes are now on the master peice. Of system. Looking at thr guy who is spasming and making unidentifiable sounds.

Looking at his condition og Daniel felt the horror. And scared of who did it. Praying he never encounters such a man.

Pov end.

While og Daniel prayed to never encounter, We the guy who did it. Getting outside of the hospital.

People eyes fixes on him. Blood coverd mask. Slash marks claw mark. All these points to the man Begin a killer.

But they can't make sense how or what is happening so chalking it up to a drama or a movie secene. They walk and get busy in thier life.

System ran fast getting in a secluded place. To get away form human and technical eyes. To return. And see what is happening to his friends.

Seeing the perfect place he leaves. And makes the transfer. To return to his world. He is returned to an unknown place.

Looking around he sees he is surrounded by trees. He was about to curse rob for again sending him. In a strange place, But before he could.

System feels a phone in his pocket which was vibrating. Taking it out. He sees in the chat group.

Yui text and a location. Opening it he sees. He is near it. So the cursing is put off. System sigh's and starts to walk in the direction.

He thinks to lose the mask. As he trys to take it off. He fails. Pulling it hard. And harder to try tl get it off. But system fails.

He think what the hell is happening. But before he can come to any conclusion.

Mask of mysterious man. Mmm for short. Durable and has a Great grip. Will never fall over your face. Only way to remove is to break it. By getting punched in the face. Consider it a pay back for all the cursing sent to me. Good getting punched in the face. :)

"FUCK YOU". Pointing a finger at the screen. Which means he is indirectly flipping himself off.

But calming himself down. He walks toward the direction to start, To see which fucker has a death wish.

After a minute of walking. He sees many people running around. And talking among them.

Leader : Check Minsik whats his condition.

Blah blah blah.

Random fodder 1 . Get the fuck away no place here.

Random fodder 2. Hey he os bleeding.

Blah blah blah.

Leader: Get that bleeding fuck.

After beating them all. And dusting his hands off.

System "Thats the last of them".

Minsik makes his entry. Grabbing him. And getting punched in the face. Mask off.

Breathing fresh air. And now system looks at Minsik.

Looking at his face, Minsik feels jealous. So going for another Punch. But system Grabs his hand. Easily.

Twisting his arm. System swing's him. And turns him toward the door. Round house kicking him.

With enough force to push him through the door. Opening the door with bang.

Eyes of all the people turns toward the broken door. Looking at the figure of minsik flying past. They looks at the guy who kicked him.

Zack, vasco , jace , vin , mary , yui , zoe , little Daniel, crystal, jay. All eyes turn toward him.

Seeing his friends in a good condition. Other then some minor damage.

They also looks at his condition. The girls eyes widen. As they put their hands over the mouth. Seeing him covered in blood and cuts. Is shocking and heart breaking for them.

Jace now realizes the voices outside were beacuse of him. But before they could think any thing more.

His voice pulls them back out of their thoughts. "Yooo i saw the message and got here fast as possible. Guess i was on time. But looking at you. You look like shit".

Before any reply can be spoken. System speaks once again. "Now like a knight in shining armor. Where is my hug. In many movies girls hug the saviour".

Hearing this mary gets ticked off. Before anyone could react. The queen of 2 secs strikes again.

Getting shoulder throwed on the ground. System now understood why vin never resisted her shoulder throw.

The feeling heaven on his bicep and temptation of devil below his abs. Something big and jiggly.

Without hesitating. System spoke in a clam and collected voice "Now I understood why vin never resisted your shoulder throw. Can you throw me a couple of more times".

Hearing this girls start to get angry. And out of all of them Crystal was the one who hits him on the head.

Mary blushes and speaks in a flushed tone. "Did vin stupidity effect you, Or did you get hit hard on the head".

Before mary could say anything more. She feels something warm on her arm and shoulder on the place where she grabbed and throwed system.

Looking at it she sees blood, That shocks her. Due to warehouse lighting she couldn't see him clearly.

Now getting a closer look. His condition seems really bad. Many slash marks. And Four holes on the side of the stomach. Blood seems to sweep out of it.

The shirt with the bit of collar white. But looking down the whole shirt is covered in red.

But a voice pulls her back, system speaks in a tired voice. "Say you all look fine, And in a good condition, yaawwn. Am tired so mind watching over me. I want to sleep".

Those words and condition. Snapped boys and girls out of their thoughts. Hearing his words. They all rush to his side, Expect little Daniel who was standing infornt of Hiroaki.

Zack was the first one to speak. In an hastily tone " Hey hey stay awake. Don't sleep".

Crouching down he trys to lift him and hold him. But is stopped by his words "zack your my best friend right, Can you full fill my last wish".

Hearing this tears start to form in the corner's of his eye's. System calls him near and speaks.

"Please let the girl's hold me, I hope you don't take in a bad way, But I don't want to be held by a boy".

Hearing this zack and the rest tears seems to evaporate. Vin is the first one to speak "Hey since he is dying why don't you, Let me send him away peacefully and don't make him suffer for any longer".

Story ends here...

Hey author here, Thanks for all id your support and stone's. Tell me what you liked about the chapter.

Was reading Cheoliang arc and figured out a massive secret. About vin why he never resisted Mary's shoulder throw.

Anyway if you liked the chapter pls tell me what you think about it.

So i have an idea about a new ff about looksim. In lookism as

toji but i have a daughter. Now just need to find her.

Can you guess who is the daughter. And will our mc of that fanfic find her before its too late.

I will work on it after this one is completed or will only make a couple of chapters.

Tell me what you think about the idea.

Also if you liked this chapter leave a comment. And tell me what reward should i give system. For this quest.