DemonGodHiatus
First of all, this author puts alot of effort into writing his chapters, however.. the grammar and such were pretty bad, but the worst of all, the mc has been made to be a cringe little turd who speaks like a 13 year old child.. most of the mc's dialogue contains things like this 'I WILL KILL ALL DRAGONS AND SLIMES HEHE' It is very sad as the author had a good idea but made the mc a cringe little 13 year old turd, who most likely will make terrible decisions and not use logic.. what really suprised me though is that this authors other novel 'Killer of Mcs' is somewhat decent.. the mc is normal.. the dialogue seems normal and overall it looks decent, so author i ask you, why did you decide to $hit out this moron of a mc for this amazing idea of a novel?
Hey author I just wanted to tell you that this is my absolute favorite novel and that it has caused me immense happiness!!! This novel has an incredible mc, cool plot elements(system), characters that both make sense and are likeable(Adeline, Riaz), and just a really good plot progression! I'm not sure where the plot is going but that's ok because it's entertaining! TLDR: LOVE THIS, BOOK GO FUNNY HAHA, HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!
Sorry English not my first language . It started interesting, but as it go i start to doubt that mc have brain at all, he behave as 13 kid and it is just lame. As for world itself it also have logic problems, plain characters, plain background, stupid motivation and some boring/expected/crynge sitcom situations. mb i just too old for this story, or just being tired, but i looked so much to read story with this desc ription and story just don‘t what i was expecting. instead of sandbox/kingdombuild with some story and exploring, we have just mc insert in another world with stange story, plain characters and poor another things. mb i just expected another things, from this novel(