the story has potential, but i just can't stand the mc. some people may like it, but not me.. normally i criticize a story after chapter 50, but sorry author you character is one of those that instead of me wishing for his success, i desire only for him to fail, which is a shame.
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LIKEhes cringe.. really cringe, imagine a 12 year old who has no logic, and is a moron who is constantly talking like this 'I WILL KILL ALL DRAGONS AND SLIMES HEHE!!' the mc constantly talks like that.. i agree with this comment, i dropped it straight after chapter 1, kind of sad that this idea was great but the author wrote the story with a disabled 12 year old for the mc
SnowmanOfEternity:What is it you don't like about mc? Just askin.
Young_Dexter_1905:hes cringe.. really cringe, imagine a 12 year old who has no logic, and is a moron who is constantly talking like this 'I WILL KILL ALL DRAGONS AND SLIMES HEHE!!' the mc constantly talks like that.. i agree with this comment, i dropped it straight after chapter 1, kind of sad that this idea was great but the author wrote the story with a disabled 12 year old for the mc
Young_Dexter_1905:hes cringe.. really cringe, imagine a 12 year old who has no logic, and is a moron who is constantly talking like this 'I WILL KILL ALL DRAGONS AND SLIMES HEHE!!' the mc constantly talks like that.. i agree with this comment, i dropped it straight after chapter 1, kind of sad that this idea was great but the author wrote the story with a disabled 12 year old for the mc