Reviews of In A Cultivation World With An Entertainment Park -(Moved to new link)
In A Cultivation World With An Entertainment Park -(Moved to new link)
lumydee
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Me thinking this story is going awesome. It was such a big letdown compare to the author previous works. Why would MC show everyone how he is making the buildings and everything and why would the MC not decide what to do with the town in general. In the end such a disappointment Gould have been a better novel but didn’ t like it was headed too.
i gave you 5 stars because of your other novel that i love so much. but lumydee there are many author of novel that incorporated the entertainment in their work i am hoping a new genre and plot a never before seen plot. and don't forget you're other work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
My Review for the Readers who are deciding: Well the concept is good and has a lot of potential. It makes the story pretty funny with MC's low EQ. Has a light background. Now onto forward, the MC is DUMB, slow-witted and narcissist. No explanation as to what reward does MC get from system until in late 60s (chapter). Really slow-witted as he usually does not properly understand the situation. The NOVEL mentioned that he was an 'Otaku' who had read all sorts of Novels in his previous life. MC doesn't even kill or even injure the person who tried to kill him. The whole Wenji town should be under System's Security and Monitoring but children as easily kidnapped and why do you even mention that MC is omnipotent in town when it signifies nothing.
História perfeita, empolgante, eletrizante, animada, engraçada, com bom desenvolvimento da cidade e ainda muita coisa para descobrir no reino inferior. Ainda tem Reino Comum, Reino Superior e muito mais. se prepare para assistir de novo todos os filmes e animes que o autor colocar por que você vai relembrar e se empolgar.
These is an overrated novel ! There's no character development in this novel. The Pacing is also nonexistent . Many characters are even forgotten or disappeared as the story progress . The setting is on the lower realm but Author just drop High level Games / Movie (or Movie World that have high civilization ) to the customers which are not fitted for them. Author, they are not modern people ! Do you expect them to understand the modern world norms with less prior knowledge about them ? The norms of the modern world are completely different to the norms of cultivation world. It sounds like you made a caveman watch sci-fi movies. The novel focuses more on comedy yet the jokes are all dry and cringy . I didn't even laugh once when I started reading this novel . The cultivation level is only decorations in this novel cause the MC could even fight higher realm or cultivators who are more experience than him , just because he is a genius. Even if he is a genius, He( who only have regular training for 8-10 years) shouldn't be able to defeat veteran cultivator who has 100 years worth of battle experience ,right ? There are also unexplainable actions the MC could do like making beast achieved breakthrough , extracting spiritual veins and etc . You should give the process how he did it not just make MC do OP stunts with no explanation . That's all .
