Victor_Vaden
Hello author, nice novel, but I don't like the part where some characters can jump over realms like our MC, I understand genius or something, but in some cases people object to several cultivation realms above them (not about the MC) and the general thing generally speaking, they are described as five-star geniuses. This is in my opinion to be improved.
I am on ch 135 so I feel that I am qualified to say some things. This novel is decent, but the English could use some help. Don't get me wrong it is still leagues above MLT, but there are some times where you have to reread a paragraph to understand what the author is trying to tell. There are some info dumps but not too many.
author of chapter 30, really enjoying it so far, slightly different story, intelligent protagonist, I just hope the story is not a fast pace, I like slice of life stories better, because it has more details around the protagonist, character details, building the world. I hope it gets better and better, congratulations.