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I transmigrated to a mafia character from a BL Dark novel!

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Jimx123_
Jimx123_Lv1Jimx123_

aside from the problems of the word 'mc' being repeated over and over in the beginning chapters there's not much problems , it gets a bit annoying sometimes especially for a reader to read a word like every 2 or 3 sentences.Based on what I've read so far the plot is great the protagonist is a bit dumb wanting to live a peaceful life and not incurring the 'mc' wrath but planned to meddle in his situation with the church helping him gain his freedom yada yada which in turn gave attention to him making him not able to escape from the 'mc' as he wanted, which is pretty stupid tbh .

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Horislava
HorislavaLv12Horislava

I'm curious how this story will go with next chapters. I quite like it so far. It's slightly different from what i usually read but i kind of like personality of that fallen angel (usual image: i love all beings, image in this story: whatever!).

Dieu_Van
Dieu_VanLv11Dieu_Van

Harem novel...story about virgin who made contract with angel, demon, god and spirit...novel with lot of passion...and dark topics 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

umiumiYui
umiumiYuiLv2umiumiYui

LOVE IT✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Estonelle
EstonelleLv15Estonelle

I really enjoyed this book until its last page. I had read all 80 current chartists within the last two days it was that engrossing lol. The only downside is that it ran out of released chapters.

Angelic_Gremlin
Angelic_GremlinLv14Angelic_Gremlin

Honestly when I first added this I didn't know what to expect but in the UNGODLY hours of the night I decided to read it yk see what it's about. Face it head on😂 but as I read it I fell in love with this book. It's not your typical book and I love that. I wish the best to the author and hope that they will still update😁

Zehra_key
Zehra_keyLv1Zehra_key

Emery and Yani I forgot who was. Dök gün chvchjbchn djjbcfjbvcgjvcdjvcdinvfjbvcvjcgi xrovc69jxsuogcdyohvf8pvvdyojjfgghvhvvvj vukbgbbvfgkbxrjb

Zehra_key
Zehra_keyLv1Zehra_key

Very very very good . Gong = MC I like it .🥰🥰🥰😍😍ksnsjzkksjsjsjsksksksjsjjssjsjsksksksjjsjskzkzksnsnsjsksn28dujxsi92j1hshd891iwjdu8d8wk2jxic891okwjd8e9o2jehduc0101odhdu37190wijh79sokhy7ikjuiwokkjuiooiu

OveractSoIgnore123
OveractSoIgnore123Lv2OveractSoIgnore123

ok. review. maybe it just me. honestly, i have to skim some of the chapters caz the writing ain't communicating that well with me. it's not bad. after completing the story, if plan to edit, i think the writing could be great. normally, i would have dropped it caz i can't feel the flow with the writing. but i didn't as i love this story. i love how it goes. so i ignore what i didn't like and keep going for the story sake. 😅 and boy, i'm glad i did. i mean, for some reasons, nsfw writings are much better. i can actually imagine both mc and ml with a much better flow. it didn't make me feel like a block like the chapters i had read for this one before. the writing has progressed. i love it. the story is great.

Kimwoosung
KimwoosungLv3Kimwoosung

I thought it would be more dark/ gorey ect.. Don’t get me wrong it has some r@pe,blood, smut , ect but this book didn’t me down ! Give this book a try it’s really good 😌! I don’t know who I should ship who with anymore but it’s fine can’t wait to see go on. Hope you stay well and don’t stress out to much to give us a chapter author!☺️

8oni
8oniLv148oni

Well, interesting. The world building are good. The character are unique and have distinctive personality. For now I am still on early chapters so I can't say more. But here is 5* from me.

Sakura_Lair
Sakura_LairLv4Sakura_Lair

Such a good novel! I couldn't stop reading it! Can't wait to see how the story and relationships develop from here! The relationships are hot🔥 the plot intricate, and just an overall amazing story! I can't wait to read more! Read with me and discover one of my favorite authors!

Cherry34Kate
Cherry34KateLv3Cherry34Kate

I have been following this novel for a very long time and I can confidently say that it is better than what I have read.interesting and intriguing plot, cool characters.so I can safely say that this novel is worth reading.

Hell_Vian
Hell_VianLv2Hell_Vian

I personally like mc being the bottom... That aside, this is a great story! it's not that dark, there are fluffs, the plot is interesting and the harem. I'm really looking forward for the updates!

Hollow_Loki27
Hollow_Loki27Lv13Hollow_Loki27

I love this book! Please update more chapters I want more! the characters are amazing and so is the sex scene. I hope to see more of the demon and angel sex scenes.

InfinityCutie29
InfinityCutie29Lv14InfinityCutie29

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Miracake
MiracakeLv3Miracake

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MidnightNyx27
MidnightNyx27Lv3MidnightNyx27

I love it so much. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Titanx328
Titanx328Lv10Titanx328

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