Take_the_Moon
aside from the problems of the word 'mc' being repeated over and over in the beginning chapters there's not much problems , it gets a bit annoying sometimes especially for a reader to read a word like every 2 or 3 sentences.Based on what I've read so far the plot is great the protagonist is a bit dumb wanting to live a peaceful life and not incurring the 'mc' wrath but planned to meddle in his situation with the church helping him gain his freedom yada yada which in turn gave attention to him making him not able to escape from the 'mc' as he wanted, which is pretty stupid tbh .
Honestly when I first added this I didn't know what to expect but in the UNGODLY hours of the night I decided to read it yk see what it's about. Face it head on😂 but as I read it I fell in love with this book. It's not your typical book and I love that. I wish the best to the author and hope that they will still update😁
ok. review. maybe it just me. honestly, i have to skim some of the chapters caz the writing ain't communicating that well with me. it's not bad. after completing the story, if plan to edit, i think the writing could be great. normally, i would have dropped it caz i can't feel the flow with the writing. but i didn't as i love this story. i love how it goes. so i ignore what i didn't like and keep going for the story sake. 😅 and boy, i'm glad i did. i mean, for some reasons, nsfw writings are much better. i can actually imagine both mc and ml with a much better flow. it didn't make me feel like a block like the chapters i had read for this one before. the writing has progressed. i love it. the story is great.
I thought it would be more dark/ gorey ect.. Don’t get me wrong it has some r@pe,blood, smut , ect but this book didn’t me down ! Give this book a try it’s really good 😌! I don’t know who I should ship who with anymore but it’s fine can’t wait to see go on. Hope you stay well and don’t stress out to much to give us a chapter author!☺️
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