Review Detail of OveractSoIgnore123 in I transmigrated to a mafia character from a BL Dark novel!

ok. review. maybe it just me. honestly, i have to skim some of the chapters caz the writing ain't communicating that well with me. it's not bad. after completing the story, if plan to edit, i think the writing could be great. normally, i would have dropped it caz i can't feel the flow with the writing. but i didn't as i love this story. i love how it goes. so i ignore what i didn't like and keep going for the story sake. 😅 and boy, i'm glad i did. i mean, for some reasons, nsfw writings are much better. i can actually imagine both mc and ml with a much better flow. it didn't make me feel like a block like the chapters i had read for this one before. the writing has progressed. i love it. the story is great.