Take_the_Moon
Story is good, just need someone to edit the grammar. The only problem is when explaining every new thing itβs very long and I just end up reading a little of the necessary information and skip through the rest. The other problem is when explaining things it ruins the flow of the story it is up to such as when a character show up with a new weapon, the story is flowing then that whole chapter is just a full on description of the grade, type of material and other thing that are just being unnecessarily introduced at the wrong time. Well that my rant.
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Me encanta, la heroΓna es muy badass me gusta que tome al male lead y se lo ponga donde quiere she is lovely. Creo que los personajes son muy lindos, tienen una buena estructura y son muy llevaderos, me gusta que no sea una historia que solo sea de manita sudada como decimos por acΓ‘. La heroΓna es muy agradable y aunque a pasado por malos momentos en su vida pasada, no deja de ser un ser agradable y que se deja llevar bien con los demΓ‘s. Amo al hermano menor es un encanto y es muy lindo, me gusta que la historia presente mΓ‘s de una preferencia sexual y que sea capas de mostrarla sin ningΓΊn problema y es muy agradable al describirla.
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I really tried my best to read this because I loved the plot and the main characters. But unfortunately I could only make it to chapter 50 because the storyline was too messy in my opinion. A lot of detail that I personally think was all over the place that made continuing to read hard. The author introduces different continent each with different species, different types of beasts (sacred, divine, mutation, demon, monsters, etc), armaments, cultivation levels, and different planets, etc, which made it hard to follow along and understand. I truly love our reckless, dumb, shameless MC and the other characters... but I donβt think I can continue on. Best of luck to those who continue on!
This is pretty good Well, it has a swallow title, but so far, I love author`s way of story telling, and I love this novel power couple, and I love how the story develop so far. This novel`s rating is too low, and I think it deserve some more higher rating For all the newbie reader, I recommend this novel, because despite the slow story development, and the slow romance, this novel has a quite solid foundation. Happy reading, and have a nice day
The best of this book are the characters, the mc is as cool as the cliche ml, but with the sweet attitude of a girl, a not so foolish personality and yet the strong determination of a woman who knows what she wants. Every character has a deep background of personality after their character until now (except the villian half sister but we still don't know much about her). The story development has interesting twist thanks to the world background as if telling us the book the mc read in her past life is not as simple and romantic as it made itself look; pain of betrayal and lots of regret are heavy in the hearts of the ones who reencarnated back in time so is a mush of different characters trying to change the future and fixing their errors and the mc is in the middle of all of this, trying to help her familily and have a happy life.
Main characters or the overall βprotagonistβ does not need to be heroic. Some of them are anti-heroes or are purely for wish fulfillment. Besides, itβs more realistic that the selfish *sshole who shamelessly and hypocritically screws over others and gets the biggest crew that ends up at the top. Pure love and romance isnβt as full of action and thus, less appealing to the general audience in Cultivator novels like these. It also helps create more relatable characters so people can see the ups and downs of life. Side characters are the lifeblood of a protagonistβs journey! Cool idea that you took this path to usurp a douchebag Main Character!