Review Detail of DingDong25 in I transmigrated as the Female Leader, but I want to marry the villain!

Story is good, just need someone to edit the grammar. The only problem is when explaining every new thing it’s very long and I just end up reading a little of the necessary information and skip through the rest. The other problem is when explaining things it ruins the flow of the story it is up to such as when a character show up with a new weapon, the story is flowing then that whole chapter is just a full on description of the grade, type of material and other thing that are just being unnecessarily introduced at the wrong time. Well that my rant.