KUKORO
Really love the characters and just the whole plot of the story. Im very hyped and on the edge of my seat just wondering what different evolution paths the skeleton can take and how Char can grow as a fighter as well! Over all, if you decide to try this novel, give it a couple chapters to fully digest whats going on in the story and i promise it wont disappoint
I will make it short. The good point of the story: -A interesting and struggling MC who is pridefull but back it up with knowledge and hard work. -So far, all of his achievment came from his work. You won't find a MC who got the perfect ability at the perfect time. (Well, he got ONE RARE thing that make his skeleton special) -The world building is good so far Bad point (Not much): -Not enough description!!!! -The pacing is sometime weird and time skip are abrupt. Overall:
Alright, this thing is great. The author first makes a chapter a day. The author also doesn't have any grammar mistakes from what I can tell. The characters aren't flat and they have personalities to them. The world background however could get a bit more exposure. The tiers are Common, Knight, and Baronet. The rest I just have no clue, however, except that, it's an impressive story that deserves its score.
Absolutely fantastic. First off, this is an actual weak to strong novel, not one where the MC rockets up the ranks quickly and dominates everybody. Second, the MC is also pretty likable and has a backbone. Third, I just like the fact that *spoiler alert* the MC makes his skeleton's middle finger a deadly weapon.
So fIrst off this story unlike Most story like this were the main’s perceived Weakness is actually a strength that is overpowered and just Dumd. IN this story there is a little more Nuance, and unlike some Novels were the idea is good yet the execution is bad to Okay. In this novel the execution is good, its easy to read and fun. No bad grammwr here or a butch of jargon yeeted at the reader. thank you This was my ted Talk.
its really well written and i myself don't see any errors its in the beggining but its developed enough for now update thing is well its on trial piroed as of feb 20 2021 so ill exclude that and i just started reading this today the character design from the characters he interacted with and for the amount of time he interacted with them seems be be developed good as well as the main character we know his basic personality from the story already so that is good and world background its just the beginning so again wont be that much detail but from what ive read so far it has some basic information and details about it and it more than works for right now and hes a kid so we are seeing from his perspective maybe alittle more i mean this novels seems to be 3rd person limited point of view so thats a given and we'll learn more about the world as he does and again we know enough about it to run with it i dont want to give spoilers so i wont say it cause ik if it has a spoiler sign on it i proboly wouldnt read it right away myself but anyways we know enough to make basic conclusions of the worlds with the info given im pretty sure with just the firet chapter it gives alot of background info and it carries on as it goes my only real not really problem with the story is that im in central time zone so it's 10 here and i have to get up at 3 in the morning for work but im up at this time anyways but by the time im off work and what not i usually spend my power stones or only have 1 left so this story will get the blunt of the draw Proboly but ill still vote at least 1 a day to keep the author writting amd thats why its not really a problem tho to me and again i just started reading this today so idk the time it ussually updates or if the author will have a stable update time in the future or even if this is the update time for it all i know is around the time it updated today if i had to guess the author loads a chapter with the chance given or in free time if this goes premium amd i really hope it does i hope it does i really hope it does 2 chapter like at once like monster integration and my vampire system but I'll be just as fine with waiting for the second chapter of thr day like with super gene or i think monster paradise? or monster store? its with sue ping as mc but yea its a long 12 hour wait for the chapters but hey its worth it and i know if the author keeps up the great work he idk ive been trying to avoid pronouns she been doing then this novel will be worth it as well and yea thats about all ima go look at the title of the book before that i had forgot and meantion it below to avoid any confusion
Reading the synopsis and initial chapters, I admit that this is a tip tier book. It is well written that would make you wanting for more. The synopsis caught my attention leaving me curious about what would happen to the MC in the future. This is a great story Author! Hoping that it will get a lot of views <3
A BIG 5 OVER 5 IN ORDER TO MAKE THE AUTOR COME BACK Love this story, love you autor, please comeback 🥸 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]