Xuanting_Official
The story is ok but the mc sucks. Supposedly the mc is a reincarnated person so i would expect him to be more mature about human relations, sadly that is not the case. The novel could have been much better but the author decided to include all the cliches you can ever think. So if you are not new to novels i dont think you would enjoy it much
I seriusly dont know how someone can read this... RAW translated versions of chineese novels are more readable than "this". There are some chapters that even after reading them I still dont know what they were all about. I doubt author will read this comment, since he/she clearly doesnt speak english, at all...
A disgrace for translations, even MTLs could do better. The story itself is very shallow and predictable, nothing but cliché plot points one after another with no originality whatsoever. My toaster is smarter than the MC and i gotta admitt i don't have the smartest of toasters. Don't waste your time with this.
If there's any author of this novel that see the reviews please either you use some third party apps or something or hire people to make your novel even a tiny bit readable... also your story is all over the place... the mc is a SIMP and a disgusting one at that... like the dude fkin felt guilty for a girl that left him and look down on him, at his lowest of his life... for fk sake... I think the author is a too much goody two shoes... For people with even a bit of sense can't enjoy this novel in anyway... Even a MTL reader will find is trash level... no offense to author, this novel is just that bad... Try and you'll improve...
worse than trash, mc is garbage there is not one thing I like about him ,there is also a r#pe sence in around ch 60 which was unnecessary,the only reason I read this was because it's limited free and good reviews which by the way was a lie maybe the only good chapter was ch1-4 overall bad grammar if you can make it pass ch 20 then I applaud you for your preservation in short don't waste your time not worth it
This story needs an editor badly. The power levels are constantly changed and there's very little consistency in the descriptions. the dialog jumps around constantly and you can't tell if the characters are talking to each other, or there's an inner monolog. the story itself is very basic so don't expect much.
This is borderline unreadable. I’ve read thousands of chapters of MTL novels, and eventually the brain pieces together the broken language and fills in the gaps. This is translated just enough to kill that imaginative process, leaving a poorly written and poorly edited story for the reader. MC doesn’t seem very smart or consistent, but I can’t say for sure because of the poor translation. Save your time and don’t bother with this novel unless it gets reuploaded with a more competent translation.
No updates for 2 months. Author, I don't know if you are a solo writer or a group of writers. But trying to write 20+ novels at the same time is too much, isn't it? Instead of writing 20+ stories, you could write this story and 1/2 more, then your writing has less grammatical and spelling errors, and this story would surely become huge popular. But you tried to do too many things at once. I liked this book a lot. It's surely a pity if this book got discontinued.