Alex_Destro
This story is amazing and thats my opinion. Its one of my favorite stories to read on here. I would have gave this story 5 stars but I want to be honest about this review to help the author the only reason why I gave it a 4.8 is because there are a few gammer mistake I really don't care much about them because I make them all the time and I just ignore them because its not that hard to figure out what the author was trying to say but some people do care that's why its a 4.8 from me its an easy fix and when the author does fix them its a 5 star from me forsure I would even give it more if it was possible.
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The story is a meh... There's really nothing to read here, generic and cringe comedy added with cliche of arrogant "young master". Grammar is really bad not gonna lie, every sentence already has 2 to 4 errors. Character Design, there's nothing here besides a stupid MC. You got me hooked up in the first chapter not gonna lie, but... Moving on there's nothing to read here. I guess the only good thing this novel has is its Updating Stability.. lol
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Just like the other novels i read with a system and whatnot. A typical weak to strong type of manga. But.... because of the novel "I Hate Systems" i kinda realize that it actually make sense now. Pls. don't read that novel first because it's gonna ruin your experience. All in all this is a pretty good novel...
I believe this story would have been better if the grammar and tenses were fixed. It feels like the story was written by a 10 year old. If it was...well, I guess I can't say much. Story development is excellent, I enjoyed it very much. Again, only problem is the grammar and tenses. Out of all, good job.