ExSoldierLv99
Cons: The english is mostly ok,p but there are a lot of gramatical errors and words that make no sence in that sentenc. for example "tatto" when it should be "arrow" "sword" instead of "spear" and many more. the world and characters are ok. story is going slow, and maybe the powerlvls are not so stranger forward, which anoys me. som of the MC's way of thinking is annoying and i believe also wrong for his situation some times.
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