thanks for the chapter!

couldn't finish it. I got about 130 ish chapters in, but the characters just killed it for me. I get with the whole multiverse that there are infinite variations of the same characters, BUT that doesn't explain how well-known characters act completely nonsensical. this is by far my main issue with the story. the arc with Jean Grey was just painful and had me grimacing. it should be mentioned that the plot armor is very strong with this one, like vibranium could be broken if he sneezed. it's a fun story if you want a mind-numbing read. the gold finger is interesting, and the early story is great. overall, it's not bed but has some major 6 if those don't really bug you, you'll really enjoy it. the interactions between the twins and mc were cute, but girls won't fall in love with a man because he is handsome the same way a man will fall in love with a girl because she is beautiful. it's a solid mixed bag. Some great stuff, some really bad. I'd say it's worth at least reading the beginning WW2 arc

so long as a tropes isn't done badly it's just a plot divice. Don't avoid them too much. people like them for a reason, just make sure they fit well. in the more recent chapters, your writing has gotten much more flowery with more intense descriptions. it's not bad, but it's a little overdone at times. my biggest advice is to just keep it consistent. Bouncing between flowery and spartan makes it tough to keep the immersion. overall, though, the story is well planned. you can see where the big baddie is, and nothing really snuck up out of the blue. I look forward to seeing how you'll rework it!

there is nothing for him to read, he didn't have a book in the supplies given to him. or is the AI just trickle feeding him information?

thanks for the chapter!

I've really enjoyed the story over the last 3 days as I binged it. I'm confused about the beginning. there was the kid in the woods that was brought to Styles' dad by the trucker. what happened to him? is he supposed to be Tristan? it seemed like a naked boy was introduced and dropped off at the sheriff's station, and then it cut to Trist and Malia in the woods. so is there a second vampire running around or an abandoned plot point or something like that? Anyways it's been a great read. you've got some really convincing characters and great story planning.

thanks for the chapters!

thanks for the chapters!

Thanks for the chapter!

thanks for the chapter!

was thinking of the wrong character😂 you are correct nawaki was around that age in cannon but I made him older

thanks for the chapter! I loved their interaction at the end

he shot one with the arrow earlier, that shot was the one that made the group of 5 scatter

That is so cool; I really like the magic he has. I hope the man is still somehow conscious while being nothing but an eye

I like this premise and how he will get a strong kind of magic. no bs wish from god, just good old fashioned trauma

thanks for the chapter! I like how the Pakura arc is progressing. it's good to see that Tsunade can get through things without needing her hand held by MC

thanks for the chapter and for not leaving us with the horific cliffhanger!