Reviews of I became Walder Frey

The male lead is NOT Chinese, Korean, Japanese, or Asian. The protagonist is a person who prioritizes his own well-being and fun, the second priority is to improve his territory. The protagonist admits that he does not feel an emotional bond with the Frey family; however, his plans include strengthening the Frey family and using its members to build a new kingdom. By the way, author, give the female characters a little more personality but without taking chapters from the MC. Also, add more details about the development and construction of the new kingdom, because this story is tagged: construction of the kingdom.

So far it is a nice concept. But chapters are too short. Additionally, MC is dumber than a rock. I hope this helps. Suggestions: Make mc think through his actions or explain why he is as dumb as he is. Develop the chapter by putting more detail when describing. Hope this helps

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Me encanta la idea y de como deja lo cliche de aliarse a loa rebeldes y se alia con los dragones. Me gusta la personalidad del mc, sigue publicando porfavor