StarryForestJaguar
Writing quality: English is not my native language, so I don't have much basis for an opinion on this, but with my level of English I didn't find any errors that interfered with reading. Update stability: Every day there is a new chapter, in addition to several extra chapters. Story development: At some points I feel like it gets a bit repetitive, sometimes the chapter is just about her routine, but it's relaxing to read. Character Design: It looks a lot like the personalities of the anime characters and they don't seem very realistic to me. Background of the world: It is incredible. Nothing to say, a gem. "In the end, a clean 3.8 star review." Then there is the harem, which I mainly don't like. But for taste colors xd. An entertaining novel.
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the author tries to write a good story but spends more than 1/4 of each chapter begging for powerstones which pads the chapter length making them cost more. it seems dishonest if not intentionally greedy. the story is ok but the grammar and constant completely incorrect use of words is frustrating as well as the author constantly switching between first and third person perspective causing significant disorientation.
The first few chapters were really enjoyable and I loved it till then but , the enjoyment gets killed when the never ending fillers start. it gets soo boring that it's really hard to continue. I'm still continuing because I heard it gets better after chapter 440 😑 I'll write another review after I finish the story.
you know i tried to read, really even drooping it for 4 times and picking it up, because i was searching for this exact type of novel but even with that i cannot deal with author ability, even if i read 30 chap only i know for the fact author directly started writing without reading any fimilar novel to at least get a few goods one, he only picked up the cliche troupe which i guess it was okay but author way of displaying emotions always gets on my nerves thank you, and everything way too predictable
I think the direction in which the author is writing the novel is good .I love the way the story is developing, the effort MC is putting in building his own business empire is being shown clearly, which is the best part about it and combined with the fun they have along this journey makes this novel my favourite ☺️. This novel is a perfect system novel and helps the MC grow step by step, unlike other novels where the system makes the MC overpowered from the start. In short I love 💕 it , worth reading.