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Ideya

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  • Ideya
    Ideya6mth
    Posted

    I haven't even started reading it but I already love it! Keep up the good work!!

    altalt
    Kingdom of the Pearl of the Orient
    Realistic · Moonlights_18
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Replied to Dotencsure

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    Since The Red Moon Appeared
    Sci-fi · Ghost of Dark Mountain
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Posted

    hi. hello. I just wanna say that your writing skills is amazing and I'm hooked since the first paragraph. I don't know if you have problem or something but I hope you can release some chapters. Thank you for your hard work!

    altalt
    Author System: Harem In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Renovator
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Posted

    ??? for fuck's sake, the mc just instantly use 3 of his only edit points in trivial matter?? what the fuck?? that just made my blood boil, not in a good way. I love how you describe his actions and different descriptions but what the fuck? I feel like shit. a knife to a warhead?

    altalt
    I Will Kill The Author
    Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented

    Morningstar is the last name of lucifer, and Lucifer is more inclined to the serpents. just based on the tidbits of knowledge I know

    If I remember correctly, which I do because I have a near-perfect memory, Lucas Morningstar belonged to one of the ruling families— the elite house of Morningstars, also known as the House Of The Wolves.
    altalt
    I Will Kill The Author
    Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Posted

    I'm dying to read the next chapter, you always write a cliffhanger

    altalt
    Virtual World: Rise of the Sword Saint
    Action · Plagiarist_Astre
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented

    the chapters are too short. I guess you stop at 1000 word count?

    And if you have any idea on the novel, or notice any fault, please inform me.
    altalt
    Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
    Fantasy · Emmanuel_Peter203
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Replied to WISEDRAGON

    Lust, Greed and?

    altalt
    Sin System: Demonic Harem After Reincarnation
    Fantasy · FireEngine
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented

    is the pronunciation emerani?

    After the short but pretty chaotic incident of Raven being the owner of the [Emmeranne].
    altalt
    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantasy · Drei05
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented

    Me

    [Drei05]: Boo or Midnight?
    altalt
    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantasy · Drei05
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented

    Sarcastically, author said Mc and Aurora like the food from the restaurant earlier

    "Thank you, brother! I only like eating your food" she sweetly while eating breakfast.
    altalt
    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented

    I don't know if I'm right but basically the mc don't want Aurora to ask money from him everytime. is this just for wordcount?

    "Of course not, sis, I can make 20k in one day of profit with BlueCloud Coffee Shop. And today our dinner was 5k. Money isn't a problem anymore, cupcake. And I want you to have your own money so that you can buy anything you want without having to ask me for money." he said with love.
    altalt
    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented

    your choice of words is misleading, 'they only had eyes to each other' sounds like both of them are infatuated with each other

    But Aurora and Theo didn't even notice as they only had eyes to each other and the food they ate.
    altalt
    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Replied to Ideya

    this novel is the only novel that make me this much of a hater

    They hugged for a few minutes.
    altalt
    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented

    and please make it believable, my siblings and I hug for only a few seconds, and aren't they in the middle of the road? do they have no shame?

    They hugged for a few minutes.
    altalt
    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented

    my head cooled down, although I don't know if ifs effective I suggest you stop using words that is too formal, then change Aurora's nickname, with the mc's way of calling his sister, many reader will think you have the intention to marry mc to Aurora

    "You are right, boss. I was thinking of this problem while I searched the information of the publishing house. In one week tops I can establish the 2 companies with the government" Sam said.
    altalt
    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Posted

    writing quality : ★ story development : ★★★★★ character design: ★★★★★ updating stability :★★★ world background:★★★★★ although i hate your writing skills, i like your plot

    altalt
    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Commented
    "I love you too, cupcake" Theo said while hugging her and stroking her grey hair.
    altalt
    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Replied to Plagiarist_Astre

    I thought I find out how, but when I tried to search it, It doesn't show up, can you please tell me the app?

    『Just walk towards the center of the city. That's where our destination is.』
    altalt
    Virtual World: Rise of the Sword Saint
    Action · Plagiarist_Astre
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  • Ideya
    Ideya1yr
    Replied to

    Ah, I figured it out. Thank you

    『Just walk towards the center of the city. That's where our destination is.』
    altalt
    Virtual World: Rise of the Sword Saint
    Action · Plagiarist_Astre
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