Reviews of I am the Entertainment Tycoon
I am the Entertainment Tycoon
StarryForestJaguar
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Hey author this is just my two cents here but, you over share. A lot. You tend to fill chapters with non story related info that makes me feel like I'm reading a Wikipedia page. I feel like I just threw away coins after reading one of those chapters. Contain your facts word-vomit for a freaking discord chat please.
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Read until chapter 28. Read only if you want to read something thats written by someone that doesnt know the different between ’a sign’ or ’a sigh’. Yeah it is bad. The author puts later chapter behind paywall but is too lazy to even check the story for spelling errors or grammar errors, something that can be done in under a minute by copy/paste to chrome docs > check and fix errors > post chap. I feel bad for people needing to unlock future chapters. With this quality it should be free to read. The story had potential. Though author dont know the valur of money, example: buying a dinner for 5k dollars and buying a store for 6k dollars. The characters are all so perfect without a single flaw.. no really, its very boring with no development. MC is suuuper handsome and I feel like I’m reading some wish fulfillment.
It's Been Days Since The Last Update And It's Not Updating I Regret Reading This In A Day.I Wanted To Know More My Thirst For This Story Is At It's Limits.Everyday I Wake To Check On This Novel And It's Still Not Updated.I Frustratingly Continue on My Day. This Is Just Me Frustrated That The Story Is STUCK AT 301!! Sigh...
The first 100 or so chapters at very nice. But after that the author goes from slow slice of love to slowmotion. The author fills chapters with unnecessary long explanations for manga, anime, music context. I mean one paragraph is enough for this story but no it’s entire chapters wasted for things I could search online if interested. It’s really sad. Furthermore during the song creation big parts of the songs are just copied in the chapters… just useless space. Also the characters are really nice and deep but most of the conversations are just too friendly and also repetitive. I mean how often do you say thank you to your friends it’s just abnormal. To summarise after 100 chapters the novel is increasingly tiring. And reeks like the author just wants to make more money for usless chapters. I drop this now at chapter 267, hopefully the author goes back to before.
Story is great, great plot, great characters, the writing is a tad tedious here and there and there is a few, welllll… QUITE A FEW times where the author ends a chapter in a question. Like: Will X be able to accomplish what they set out to accomplish? or: Will Y be able to do it? Besides that the only other problem I have is with the update frequency. Some months are great, tons of updates, awesome! Other months the privilege asks if you want to pay to see 50 chapters in advance but 2 months have passed and the author’s only put out around 25. If you do choose to pay for privilege, make sure there’s a backlog of the amount of chapters you’re paying for first, just to make sure. That is my only major complaint I have. I love the story, I just wish I could read it more often. I understand that writing takes time and I’m definitely not criticizing the author for taking his time, since I myself have attempted to write and I know how challenging it is. I just wish that the privilege wouldn’t say: Pay for 50 chapters, when only a few had been released.
I love the storyline of this novel, but I really like it if author make a harem for theo. and please update regular, if you don't want to lose your readers, because Readers are being impatient when they get 1 chapter in one month at least 4 chapter a month will be preferable. So, please update new chapters 😔😔😔
This feels like it's written by an incel trying to be the cool but nice guy. Decent world building but kinda trying too hard, and cringey. Characters are hmmm, it's hard to describe them, it feels like the author needs to touch grass and meet real people. Jk. The story's pacing also needs some stability, like it took us 100 chapters for the first 5 months of the story's timeline, but 200 chapters to finish 1 month with nothing noteworthy accomplished. Since the author tried to do a lot of things simultaneously, like making a music album, along with music videos, making an anime, training the MC's "friends", and much more. And in-between those we are introduced other POV which takes up quite the chapters but doesn't really add anything to the story. And info blocks too! Like the author just copy-pastes (with a few edits) paragraphs of infos about technical stuff like about directing, cinematography, drawing, etc. I think he's just doing it to fill up the word count, and damages the flow of the story. After 300 chapters, we can still see a lot of things going on with nothing accomplished. And the excuse of saying "It's slice of life so just chill" is just a pathetic excuse, even SoL novels have story arcs that help readers follow the story's pace and gives them and the characters a sense of accomplishment and direction. Well, there's a lot of things I could nitpick about but I still genuinely enjoy reading this, it's a good story when you're taking a break and are still looking for other good novels.
