I'm posting another chapter sometime today or tomorrow I just want you guys to be aware of somethings.
Ps, I'm not dropping or going on hiatus however I do wanna let you guys know that as we speak I've read through what I've currently written and as we speak am rewriting chapters and or preparing to do so. This is due to certain plot holes, inconsistencys and new ideas I've thought up in my head. That doesn't mean I'm gonna stop posting it just means that, firstly, posts are gonna slow down after a certain point, two, after I have enough rewritten chapters, I'm gonna copy and paste the current ones into one chapter in the auxiliary section so that way you guys can see the changes and improvements once I've implemented this.
The reason I'm doing this besides the plot holes is because I'm a little OCD, just a little, and I've started noticing little rushed problems in the way I've made my MCs personality seem. For instance there no clear goal or reason for my Mc to be the way he is, there is no immediate detriments or reasons for him to be the way he is, or at least that's what I think.
And what's even funnier is the fact all this was caused by watching a video on Tai Lung and Shen from Kung Fu Panda. Seriously I'm not kidding. Isn't that something.🤣
Like there characters are tragic but there underlying goals and character development are clear.
And this is something I think my Mc is lacking.🤔
You tell me what you guys think.