lumydee
Wow, Author this is new, and also not the same as the other novel where the mc is either reincarnated/transmigrate on earth or some Immortal World, and here you create a new world where the MC literally comes from the new planet not on earth nor some Immortal world noce job author👍 so I'll rate it as 5 also plssss, so u might as well make the MC's World Unique
10/10 story in almost every way for the first 100 chapters. Unfortunately, the author starts writing a similar style to his other books during the auction arc (short chapters with lame comedy and obvious plot development). I suspect this is because the chapters become paid so he is just focusing on pumping out as many low-quality chapters as possible and dragging the story out. So why do I rate the story 4.8 stars still? Luckily the author listened to the comments and actually stopped with the lame Chinese face slapping scene with a white lotus and moved on from it. Current chapters are still lower quality than the earlier chapters but they are at least still a bit interesting. I just find it sad that the author seems to turn their brain off once the paid chapters start and just starts writing generic filler content :/ In conclusion. One of the best novels out there for the first 100 chapters. I suggest you just drop the novel before the auction arc and leave it. Author if you read this I think you had an amazing novel here and I wish you would just take a step back for a bit and spend more effort on each chapter and you will retain more readers in the long run! BEST OF LUCK! <3
I really like this book so far because it’s extremely nice to see the mc in action and I just love how the concept of the book is very different compared to other system novels. It’s also nice that the mc doesn’t completely depend on the system because a lot of system novels are like that and not a lot of character development is shown. I definitely don’t think you will regret this if you like an intelligent mc.
I like the story but the author should really look into hiring an editor/proofreader if he's taking money for this novel. It's not unreadable and mostly grammatically correct but some words will just be wrong. like "minister" instead of "monster". it's not hard to understand but really takes you out of the flow of the story of it happens p.ex. in a fight scene.
Best storyline...ever! Best MC...ever!! Best attitude towards System...ever!!! Can't get enough of this MC. [img=update][img=update][img=update] Where are my coins...take em all![img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The book is incredible with a flawless writing that can only be perfected through time and practice. I enjoyed reading it. However my problem is not that the story is slow paced but it is stretched out. So stretched out that I find myself skipping chapter to get to the end. I don't know whether I am in the position to advice but while these extreme slow paced battle scenes might be good to action/adventure, in horror it completely takes away the tension or fun.
Great story idea and mostly well written but hot dang if there isn’t a case of OVERWRITTING here. Every single character has ALL of their past and thoughts explained even if they are just a passerby or someone working the fields in the background. It really kills the storyline and makes it tedious to read.
Good premise, average story development. Story had potential, unique idea but it was not developed very well. Lumydee San, you have talent but I feel you are focusing on multiple stories at same time resulting in the quality to drop. I am big fan of I am the King of Technology, similarly unique story written far better than this novel, however your quality droped and updates slowed after you started writing other novels. You have talent but as a fan it is my personal feedback that you should focus on one story at a time making them the best they can be instead of publishing multiple stories that don't reach their full potential or fully showcase your talent as an author.
Never wrote a review, have been on the app for longer than a 4 years and can consider this one of the best novels i have read. Followed since the trial read and can say it's a 5 star. The only reason for a 4 start is because the amount of time between updates is too horrible. it makes my day worse everyday when I see it's not updated. Author if you can see this please " More chapters!".