Review Detail of Savish05 in Host, Please Be Honest! What Exactly Are You?

Good premise, average story development. Story had potential, unique idea but it was not developed very well. Lumydee San, you have talent but I feel you are focusing on multiple stories at same time resulting in the quality to drop. I am big fan of I am the King of Technology, similarly unique story written far better than this novel, however your quality droped and updates slowed after you started writing other novels. You have talent but as a fan it is my personal feedback that you should focus on one story at a time making them the best they can be instead of publishing multiple stories that don't reach their full potential or fully showcase your talent as an author.