Reviews of His Peasant Wife : Yao Ling
His Peasant Wife : Yao Ling
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This book is very good! I am new here on webnovel and this is the first book iโve been reading. Although I havenโt finished the novella/novel (depends if the total word count is somewhere between 17,500 and 40,000 words), from what iโve read so far, the writing quality is very good but there is some wiggle room for improvement and the stability of updates is quite good as well. The story development is very smooth as we, the readers, can see how the relationship between Yao Ling and Yao Ying is changing in a natural development. However, the character design and the world background is where I find most of my problems lay. We, the readers, are told that Yao Ling and Yao Ying are beautiful - that much is certain. However what we arenโt told is why. Yes we do get some descriptions of their beauty and alluring temperament, but what we donโt get descriptions on is why people find their appearances beautiful and why their temperament is so intoxicating to those that surround them. We are also not given much information about the world background. We are told by the beginning of the novella/novel
Sweet,heartwarming story filled with a relaxing romance....Though their true identities are in the fog which is a little unsettling for them,especially for MC. But I hope things will go good for the pair for I really wish so...Anyway,the story is great so far...I just hope there won't be some annoying pest to make the story more interesting... It's really getting on my nerves....reading stories in the same patterns... This novel is really quite good though.. .
This is a addictive story I like it very much I would for sure highly recommend this one novel to everyone. Itโs definitely interesting I found myself hating and loving the characters all at the same time๐ฅดvery confusing!!! Lol nevertheless I find it to be extremely a great read. No regrets!! Itโs very entertaining keep this story coming๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐlots of love truly for this amazing novel!!!
So Yao Ying is starting to explore his 'own paradise' now, huh i don't think so that he could wait his six-month period of abstinence and self-control if this continues. Well, nothing is wrong there as they were already husband and wife, but on the other hand, Yao Ying will be breaking his promise, first to Yao Ling then secondly, to the shameless General Lin...peace there. So Yao Ying is starting to explore his 'own paradise' now, huh i don't think so that he could wait his six-month period of abstinence and self-control if this continues. Well, nothing is wrong there as they were already husband and wife, but on the other hand, Yao Ying will be breaking his promise, first to Yao Ling then secondly, to the shameless General Lin...peace there. So Yao Ying is starting to explore his 'own paradise' now, huh i don't think so that he could wait his six-month period of abstinence and self-control if this continues. Well, nothing is wrong there as they were already husband and wife, but on the other hand, Yao Ying will be breaking his promise, first to Yao Ling then secondly, to the shameless General Lin...peace there.
I love this story. The couple is really sweet and cute. Their young and innocent nature makes me want to pinch them. The romance, not that strong but the story is quite intriguing, as the background of the husband still unknown and the background of the late mother from the wife also still unfold. However, this cute couple story is so lovely to make me jealous.
