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2wen
2wenLv24yr2wen

This book is very good! I am new here on webnovel and this is the first book i’ve been reading. Although I haven’t finished the novella/novel (depends if the total word count is somewhere between 17,500 and 40,000 words), from what i’ve read so far, the writing quality is very good but there is some wiggle room for improvement and the stability of updates is quite good as well. The story development is very smooth as we, the readers, can see how the relationship between Yao Ling and Yao Ying is changing in a natural development. However, the character design and the world background is where I find most of my problems lay. We, the readers, are told that Yao Ling and Yao Ying are beautiful - that much is certain. However what we aren’t told is why. Yes we do get some descriptions of their beauty and alluring temperament, but what we don’t get descriptions on is why people find their appearances beautiful and why their temperament is so intoxicating to those that surround them. We are also not given much information about the world background. We are told by the beginning of the novella/novel

His Peasant Wife : Yao Ling

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2wen
2wenLv22wen

Gah! I posted my draft by accident! Does anyone know how do delete a review?

missoline87
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Hahaaaa thank youuu very much for the review 🥰🥰 Desciption is my weakest point. I will try to improve it along the way. Thank youuu 😘😘😘