zhiruyi
I just discovered this book and this wonderful Author one week ago and I just can't get enough of it. I already read all 303 chapters and waiting desperately for more! I am impressed with the story, flow, interlink stories, passion, details and author's commitment to please and care for all readers. Zhiruyi, you definitely gain a most fervent follower with me!!! Thank you for sharing your marvelous talent with us! ๐๐คฉ
The storyline in great and the character build up is fantastic. Author makes the reader yearn to read more and find out what happens next. I completed the ' Billion Dollar Exchange ' by the same author and I loved the story to bits so I do believe this one will be a better improvement of the former. Nicklaus though cold and icy I believe has a soft spot which only Tiana can touch. Tiana will also discover herself more through him. Cant wait to finish this book....more votes for you Author.
Donโt me get me wrong the story is great minus the odd placement of events But, the writing is TERRIBLE. I still gave this book a chance because I like the story but itโs hard to read because of how badly written it is. I have not finished it yet I but I came to write a review. The writer does not use complete words, The American expressions are all wrong and donโt make any sense. There are just Too many writer mistakes to the point where itโs obvious that the writer was just lazy, careless and really uneducated in writing this story. Iโve read some of this story on another platform and it was written better, still not the best. Would have been so much better if the writer paced themselves. Not to mention how mostly every instance is so exaggerated to the point that itโs extremely cringey. The storyline is the only that is good minus the odd placement of events as I mentioned before.
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