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Worth reading? YES. Progression makes sense? Not really. Mc is the strongest bloodline holder and is humble and all, but the mc does so much from age 9 to 11 and then even more in just his first year. Being honest, just from 11 to 12 years old, the story feels like it crammed 5 years of progress into one. Mc started with a progression plan, but now he just works on deciphering runes so he can understand stand a book. At the same time, he can duel adult wizards, plural, by himself. How or when he learn all this is probably thrown to the few months before his first year where he read half of hogwarts curriculum. I won't say anything about the prepubescent genius group he trains in little to no time or the "merlin magic" that he learned behind the scenes. the rest of the story is good. A bit too much slice of life without any substantial self improvement mentioned, but the jump in power and small amount of time for it is what gets me. he should be voldyshorts level by end of 2nd year.
That's somewhere close to what Author must look like, but even if he is monkey, he writes better than most people.( look at gif ) Stability. Story. Development. Everything is good and would satisfy most people Especially good is that it is No Harem story and it is not based only on getting stronger. Just Like other stories This Monke Author wrote. Author can keep it interesting without relying on strength to make story good. That's it. I'm out. Have a nice read
Story and the characters in this novel was horrible to me . Character growth of mc is almost zero Mc is too op and story is like rainbow ans sushine when mc could have been killed many times but because of dumb plot nothing happen to them Mc friend and family should have been in more danger and be killed for associating with but just nothing much happens . In my opinion if you want some wholesome novel with mc facing no danger then this novel is for you
Well, I mean, wet teen dreams. I will never believe in my life that this work is written by an adult ... The only plus is no harem, everything else is just fantasy, on the topic of fantasy. I read about 3-4 years ago, a Chinese novel. There, the main character, falls into the past and ... In the 2nd chapter, he is looking for Bill Gates * (the most fantastic thing is he finds him and makes an appointment) and sells him, his own Windows. In chapter 15, he is already a billionaire, in one hand all the girls he knows, in the other pathetic hooligans. There were many chapters, but I did not read any further. Everything is slower here, but I have already reached Jobs. And an 11 year old child knows the future, but the author says that it is the mind. If it was 1 time, I would agree, but not 10 times every day ... There are many more, but everything will not fit into 1 comment. So I'll leave my 3 here, I think deservedly so. 5 points for quality, 5 for updates, 2 for a story, 2 for a character, 1 for a world. Everything is as I saw this work. No hate, just my objective assessment, well, for someone subjective.
This fan fiction is absolutely awesome. First of all it is written by the author of 'Grandpa Universe', which already warrants a 5 star in my opinion. Even more so, I love the premise and the personality of the mc. The humour is pretty cool and there are no grammatical mistakes. All in all, a great read for a harry potter fan.
Written by one the best authors of Fanfiction, presented on a platform made for the best of weebs, a detailed and fun story involving the prologue to the hardy potter franchise. how will this develop?? WHO KNOWS! But one thing is sure! it wont be a cringy emo/depressing harry potter fanfic! and for that imma read it and be grateful!! there is too many wannabe edgy fanfics, this will definitely be a fun and exciting story with wholesome and funny moments ^-^
WOW I've been reading this book since the Naruto fic started and haven't reviewed it yet... I'm disappointed π ANYWAY! Let's review. 1-Writing Quality: The grammar is great, it's well written and it's fun to read. There's nice spacing between scenes, and the author knows how to make sound effects and I point this out because recently I read a book where it was so translated that *whoosh* turned into *call out* , I kid you not it hurt my heart. [5 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: No comment, it's nice, it's fluid and most importantly there's info to stuff related to the story. Even if people don't know Alohamora at least once in the book we get a description of what the spell does. There's no delays in the plot like massive flashbacks or random and major timeskips. [5 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: The characters are well designed and have consistent personalities, if their personality does change it will be gradually and it feels so good to read a good character development. Random Hater: "But the MC changed completely." B***h MC was a momma's boy and even after 400 chapters he still is! He grew but his essence is still there. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: We get chapter daily, I even got chapter updates on Christmas! [5 Stars Here] 5-World Background: There is so much world background that I've learned more about world history here then at class! I am currently living in on of the countries that Mighty Monke mentioned and I can attest to the things he mentioned so he does his research before writing and then he improves and makes a great chapter. [5 Stars Here] Overall: 5.0 because ratings can't pass 5.