Reviews of Harem System: An Implosion on This Wonderful World

(2.5 to 3 stars but the star rating above is to balance this overrated novel) Man can you somehow remove paimon from his soul, separate her from him or even make the mc kill her . Here presence is disgusting as not only does read the mind of the mc and forces the plot/harem to the degree of nausea but she is practically manipulating his life, actions and love life to the point that I believe that she is the main Villain or a redundant painful exsistance . I don't know how can you make the mc tolerate her and why whyyýyyyyyyy did you give here so much authority,control and freedom. Seriously I wanted to give up on this novel but its potential is amazing but you keep wasting it mainly because 3 things paimon(mainly), how the supposed reincarnation of the sun & reincarnation of Adam is so mentally challenged &immature (I don't mind being weak to stron strength) and finally the mc age yah not the harem age but the mc can't you please understand that 14 years old for him isn't a good age for harem,continous s*x ,preg****y & having children. I believe that even his children is older than him in the future is this not bothering any one when picturing Adam the father of all humanity and the sun the oldest object in the solar system somehow a 14 year old brat isn't what comes to mind right?. I wish I could continue reading this book but I can't take it anymore 🥲🥲 it gotten to the degree that reading this not only kills my mode for the day but also give serious headaches, seriously boils my blood in anger and make me disappointed & depressed. I am dropping it until you the author or anyone either tell me how the author is going to handle this problems or until the novel end or goes 100 or so chapters so I can see if this problems are solved or even addressed by the characters themselves somehow (agree to prevent paimon from reading his mind , give the ownerof the system some authority over it not make him a puppet, make him do an introspection on his actionsor even make the mcs women address there problems and how much forcing and pressuring does they do on the mc and address him with this problem).

Good for time killing, the story is pretty interesting unlike other konosuba fanfic keep up and please don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The story started out great, it was entertaining until the world hopping quests started. If it was properly executed then the story might have been great all through out. Relationships for me felt rushed as the girls would immediately accept being in a harem after a few words or chapter. Next is that since the story kept jumping from world to world, it felt confusing at some parts. Lastly the system, I think this should be named as parody system instead of harem, cause it felt like some parody fiction, due to the systems action as well as the MCs. though I guess being a parody matches the MCs main world which is konosuba

Honestly I quite enjoyed it during the beginning. However, when random children started popping up and also random lovers with no background started showing up, the story got very confusing. Especially during the Akame ga kill arc, which honestly could’ve been ended so much faster and simpler. I don’t know why the author decided to add so much unnecessary stuff like dream children, time travel, and all the side stories. In my opinion, you don’t even have to add anything, just erase some of the unnecessary content and the story would’ve progressed so much clearer. On the flip side, quality of writing was good and was clear to understand. Story is also very interesting and unique. Definitely a good sense of humor, although repetitive. I also think that the author had a good grasp on the originality of each character.

If only the mc wasn't a simp, a beta male that is submissive to women, he kills without hesitation every male that wants to kill him, but when it's a woman, he immediatly starts to act like a brainless japanese harem mc that simps on every woman he sees. Also, it was mentioned that he had a perfect compatibility with sunshine but somehow he can't use it during the night like mael, the one who was the perfect vessel for it. that means he got nerfed. There are just too much clichés that I'm skipping paragraphs at this point. The only thing that kept me reading till now is the thanos and jojo references , but even that is getting old so I suppose I'm dropping this in a few chapters.

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well, here is my review, as far as I read the story became very repetitive and boring. because? the answer is that every book or fanfic has to have a framework and a goal example a betrayed protagonist seeking revenge. a protagonist who seeks power. a protagonist in a romance. etc and once the goal is met, the story ends because beyond that it's already boring In this fanfic the story was normal. neither good nor bad but there was no specific goal, just something very vague Now the protagonist is powerful and already has children (from the future) which doesn't make sense because they are from different times, just going to the past is dangerous. another is that the protagonist is very young (14 years old). imagine that a child of that age already has to be responsible for children. illogical I know it's a fanfic but all books have to have a reasonable logic, and if it doesn't then it's not worth reading.

This fanfic is really just a matter of taste. Some might like it, while some might hate it. Personally, this just aint for me. There are alot of joke references especially jojo, so if don't know them then you will be just be as clueless as I am. Then there's also lot of sexualization on breast size 😑. I am more of the vanilla type romance so this is just me being biased here, but I recommend you guys to read the first 20 chaps before deciding on what to think of this fanfic.

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Tampilannya cukup bagus, dan rasanya lumayan tapi sedikit asin, anda bisa menambahkan sedikit ganja biar rasanya enak, .... apa? aku hanya memberi ulasan yang bagus, aku tidak tau apa yang harus saya katakan!!!

Well the first chapters are trash. but when you keep reading it, it get's better. In the latest Chapter, Haru ain't simp anymore and he seems more mature... Girls keep chasing him, not him anymore.

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this truly a bad novel as for why many other reviews have already covered what i could say p s the spam 5 star reviews are just too much in this trash and this novel is for cucks

Beginning isn't that bad. The Gaia situation kind of grossed me out, but I just ignored it and moved on. Kind of started losing interest as soon as August (I think, whoever his first son is) was introduced and seeing how you were hinting at him and Coco together in the future lowered my interest even further. Now we are reading chapters about him meeting and training his daughters future husbands and I really just do not care about any of that lol. Good luck with this, but I think I'm gonna go ahead and stop here.

this truly a bad novel as for why many other reviews have already covered what i could say p s the spam 5 star reviews are just too much in this trash

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