Goblin_Kun
I've always had soft spot for reincarnation novels where MC is reborn as a goblin after reading Re:Monster as such I always start out with a good opinion about stories that have this format. So far this story has met my expectations of showing us just how weak a goblin is and just how weak MC starts out as because of his race. I like the emphasis put on the [Evil] trail and how it influences the Goblin's mentality and actions. The one thing I can say that I dislike is the Progenitor System. I'm not a huge fan of that because I like power ups and divine systems that favor the MC and the System he has clearly is designed to create offspring and make his own tribe or branch of the race. Overall I think it's a pretty good Fic that grows from the standard Goblin Evolution Rebirth MC. If the genre ain't broke then don't fix it is what I think.
The story just doesn’t make any damn sense. Don’t recommend........…….………….………………………….………………………………….…………………............... Not to mention that the story is the exact reason why teachers say, “show, not tell”. The characters are pretty shallow and the author seems to forget about the main character’s former life. Also, the author does not quite understand how a progenitor works/ what it is.
Very interesting different take on goblin reincarnation. By the looks of things he will become a powerful mage since his mother has a strong rolay bloodline, not sure of his father though. His ability has high potential. Still early to say wether he will be OP but looking at his status page he is sertainly leaning towards being OP Many thanks Please keep the release scedual constant, id rather have a chapter or two every day than mass realease or huge chaperes every random day.
This my preliminary review, So far as I could go, the story has yet to show a glimpse of what the MC's end goal is about. It is not clear whether he would just end up with a farm game breed and select or do anything like establish goblins as a free race and not just a hunted monster in this world. It is also not yet shown what or who actually would be the main antagonist. For now the I rate 3.5
If you're considering reading this thinking that the mc is going to be some sort of war crazed bad ass hell bent on making the world suffer look else where. This is a story of a goblin trying to fight against his latent inner demons and trying to become something more than the monster people believe him to be as well as trying to help his people do the same.
I am loving the freshness of this story. Goblins were never something I seriously considered investing any interest in, yet thanks to this novel I find that they can actually be rather fun and interesting. I'm enjoying the characterization and the different concepts from the usual dnd style world build. Just please please please author do not give up and keep writing. You have something here if you can just keep going.
I enjoy it. Nuff said. But I must right this out to be 140 characters so instead here's a fact. Elephant Males stay with the family until they reach 12 to 15 years of age, when they leave the herd and live alone or join up with other bulls. Male and female elephants live separately with bulls only visiting when some of the females are in their mating season, known as estrus.
MC died after being dumbed by his girlfriend... okay Reincarnated- YES heres comes my day As a goblin- DaFunk please tell me theres no Goblin slayer... well maybe I can get close to my mother I never known mothers lov.. She kicks you as soon as you get near her- Im not crying As a normal goblin I should... well screw normal goblins! this is about a goblin who will name would be etched in the history who will change everything you know about goblins