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A 10 old child confined to a hospital room for all most of his life dies when his illness takes him from the world,he loved to read fantasy stories with swords and magic, oh how he especially loves the hero’s he would dream about exploring his own fantasy world. Until he was reincarnated into a new story his own story This is my first attempt at writing a story. so if by some grace of god I get good enough at writing a story I’ll probably try to re write this I don’t know how often I write maybe once a week or two also any suggestions/advice would be appreciated also this will probably suck just letting ya know I don’t own dragon age, only my oc I guess Also this will be an AU as a I have a final enemy worked out already I just don’t know if this is in the direction they’ll take the games or series I also dont own the cover Not a harem If someone else already did this then i dont know i havent read any dragon age fanfic that goes in the direction mines gonna go The free rein over mana power wont make him overpowered instantly or anything like that he won’t even have the willpower to use it all this power does is work like life in vains rudeas im saying his because its the only iteration of that anime or manga I’ve read or watched but basically with his willpower he can use mana to create or control his own creations and others with free will so he’s only limited by his imagination and willpower

Zeinex · Video Games
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13 Chs

New beginnings

<9:25 Dragon>

(Titus)

[As we headed towards the pickup I couldn't help but overthink I mean I've thought it over six times this week and another eight just today the rundown basically is get my wife Lisa out of the manor then get in a carriage to the pickup where Dorian and my personal carriage and loyal guards/friends are waiting then to just leave simple right .]

[Just as we exit the back door I felt the mana around me shift it's always been a weird and horrible ability when I was young it astounded my father, but then I turned five and being proud turned to jealousy and being jealous turned to hate just the hate wasn't verbal beatings just with his hands no magic but it still hurt like a bitch. Then I turned ten and it finally dawned on him if he can use blood magic for rituals with slaves he can use it on me saying it was safe and it would only hurt for a little bit and to hold on Just a little longer that experiment took two hours and he did it 4 more times before he declared it a lost cause.]

[And the only person who was there for me at the time was Lisa and although she's an elf her perseverance and kindness is what helped me it was around the time I stopped calling them slaves and my father thought it was weird then just checked it off as another weird trait of mine and thought nothing else of it then he told me that I'll be going to the circle in Carastes and I could bring one slave so I chose Lisa and then sent me and thats where I had the most fun in my life so far where I met my best friend and figured out I had feelings for Lisa though it was more Dorian telling us we were sheltered ok the only thing about love I knew was marriage because thats what father wanted it would give him more political sway and me an even more legitimate heir with a major families wife at my side and then Me and Lisa came home. Right when I was about to turn 17 it was the perfect time to run to get away so me and Lisa are leaving to be together and to get away from my father the archon of the Tevinter Imperium.]

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(Lisa)

"Lisa we have to go right theres a mage coming from the left."

"Got it."

[Then we finally made it out of the archons villa it may float in the sky but that doesn't mean their isn't escape routes and with Titus being the new heir he knew every one of them and now were finally on a carriage to the pickup It's gonna be fun traveling with Dorian what was that weird swear again ahh yes Vishante Kaffas it's a weird one i think dorian came up with it he's always been weird but a like able weirdo and he brings joy to the party so Titus has invited him every time without fail.]

[After about a 30 minute carriage ride we made it to dorian oh my what is he wearing this time it's always been a huge thing for dorian I don't get why his parents would want to change him at all I guess some tevinter families are messed up]

"Ah Lisa darling so glad you and Tit-us could make it."

"Dorian you know thats not my name we've known each other for 5 years already just get a new nickname for me man."

"My gosh Tit-us I don't ever know what you mean I thought that was your name I'm so very very sorry my prince."

"Dorian lets get a move on Titus might blow up half of minrathous if you don't stop."

"Oh Lisa you know he wouldn't kill innocents and besides I was just joking with him I guess our trip will be very stressful well everyone in Coach take us in a straight line to Ferelden."

[As Dorian closed the door I couldn't help but think about how Titus and Dorian we'll take the news but to hell with it i'll just blurt it out.]

"Titus"

"Yes honey"

"Im pregnant"

"I know"

"Now don't be mad and let me..wait you knew"

"Of course I knew remember mana sense the only people I can't use mana to check on are dwarfs and not to freak you out but I've constantly monitored you with it ever since I found out"

"Wait I'm going to need you and Titus to back up Lisa's pregnant"

"Took you long enough to catch up Dorian and yes Lisa's pregnant."

"What are you guys going to do about the kid though Lothering may not have a lot of templars but they'll still go through towns for routine checks."

"I already thought of that see I researched and was able to make a necklace that will stop anyone besides me from seeing or feeling his sensitivity to mana and last I checked my mana sense is a rare case."

"Sigh well congratulations you two very happy for you both!"

"Dorian I have a question an important one so no bull ok."

"Ok"

"If something happens to us I want you to be there to take care of our son

"I'll do it i'll make sure your son wears the finest fashion only approved by his uncle dorian."

"Dorian you do know me and Lisa will have to act poor right."

"Titus it's insulting you think I need a lot of gold to make sure my nephew has terrific fashion."

"Ok Dorian but no forcing him if he doesn't want to."

"I would never do that Titus and you out of everyone should know that!"

"I know dorian but forcing my son to wear something you want is in no way close to the incident and it's your fathers moronic self that tried to do it in the first place, and i'm sorry I couldn't do anything but my father would only give me some power at 17 and you know were kind of running away right now."

"Thanks Titus."

"Any time now lets enjoy the rest of this trip."

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(Titus)

Nine months later

"Come on honey push"

"Oh shut up"

"Yeah what she said."

"Oh shut up Dorian."X2

"Yikes I'll leave and let you to figure it out call me back in when your done."

"Come on keep going, keep going,and done."

"What do you wanna name him honey."

"Jackson huff, huff, Jackson Revas for freedom."

"I think thats perfect."

"Dorian you can come in now, And Great job honey."

"Thanks Titus."

"And the fabulous Dorian is omg it has your hair and her eyes amazing and, wait did it just fall asleep?"

"I guess he's tired or dorian's so creepy he instantly passed out."

"That hurts Titus that hurts very bad."

"Oh would you two shut up and let the baby sleep."

"I guess Lisas right lets all take a nap and you can take the second room dorian."

"Ok goodnight."

"Goodnight."

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(Jackson Revas)

[Did I Just get born again omg I got reincarnated I just hope I get to live a nice life {Yawns} huh i'm tired dang baby body."

I know its a bit of an info dump at the start sorry

If you have a grammar suggestions please comment it helps a lot thanks for reading

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