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Hello, This is Avarohm Leslie, a representative editor from another platform which focuses on adventurous and high concept genres. I really think your story is intriguing with unique appeal to readers. Sincerely hope that we can have a chance to discuss further cooperation with you. If you are interested, please reach out to me at avarohm_review@outlook.com. Looking forward to introduce more to you. Thanks.
Well what a refreshing experience. The way the story is told is like writing a journal. Like you are trying to have a conversation to your self. The MC is not OP but has a potential to be OP. Just imagine, making the strongest metal on earth be your skeleton. Or making a much better supersoldier serum. The only limit is your own imagination if you powers like than. Add this novel to your library folks!
The author is undeniably a talented writer and has actually made the mc a half believable 'scientist' as an alchemist should be. Its a refreshing premise I hope the author sticks too and expands upon more no matter what the super op mc and harem community demand and favour. My only real gripe is that the journal like writing style creates some tonal and pacing 'whiplash' that are probably only going to be present in these early chapters.