Monachre
The writing and dialogue is simple, and the plot seems to go along decently. I do have several issues that I will point out. These are my suggestions, so you are free to ignore them. Main problem is that the plot seems to be disjointed and not flowing well in the very beginning. Like when you introduced the girl as an assassin, I was a bit thrown off at how abrupt the input was. I would highly recommend that you change some things in the beginning chapters to hint at her other side. Your later chapters are much better in writing, but you need to create a better impression from the beginning to draw readers in. But besides that, keep up the good work author !
The story is pretty great! The author goes in straightforward! ((Whish is what I like since there's not that much info dumping!)) The characters as well are well thought of, all in all, the author is very good at explaining details and expressing the character's emotion! It hooked me the first time I read it and I hope that the author would update even more 🤗🤗