Reviews of Fated

Your Descriptions are on point. How you introduced the characters is impressive and what I liked most was the vivid picture your Descriptions made in my mind. I like the plot so far and the leads. Looking forward to more chapters

Wow!!!....from the synopsis and the first few chapters I read, all I can say is Excellent 🙌🏽🙌🏽.... its so captivating and the storyline is really catchy😃...kudos to the author🙌🏽...can't wait for more update.

The author has a very extraordinary standpoint and interesting background. The novel was very absorbing and made me read the whole. keep it up!

The story is very smooth to read. I like it is very descriptive and I can relate to the male lead very well 😊 Very good story, highly recommended!

I love everything about the story, this book certainly deserves an award. I love how the book makes me addictive and I also love the story development together with the writing quality.

This story is a great read. The Characters especially the female lead has their unique character which you could easily emphasize and enjoy with. The Narratives too are clear and can be perceived by the readers well. World Background is written well. Story Development, not fast pace and develop well. Overall this story is a great read and addition to my collections. Greatly recommended. Great work author.

can someone tell me the order of the chapters so I can read it without getting confused because the chapters are not in order!! so far it's a great read but it's making me mad when I go to the next chapter and it has nothing to do with what I just read or it's 2 of the same chapter!

Duplicate chapters, missing chapters. The storyline is hard to follow and honestly boring... It could have been more descriptive and followed a more interesting plot. There was plenty of opening for more indepth writing but fell short each time.

chapters were all over the place and out of order characters and story was decent story was a little abrupt with the progress and ending could have lengthened out to give more depth to the story and characters

Great story! I liked how both people's pov has been described in chapters. The storyline is very interesting and detailed oriented. I am hooked and will be waiting for more updates. All the best and good luck

From the synopsis to the very first chapter, you are drawn in. The description is on point, you’ll get the picture of every thing going on as you read on. It’s watching a movie while reading. Really good . A job weldone author 👍👍

Hello everyone, thank you for the honest review you left on this book, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. More chapters to come and I hope you continue reading it.

The start was awesome and the synopsis was very hooking. I am utterly speechless in the novel that I have read. This needs more exposure in the future for it to have big views! The author was talented and has potential so this novel was in good hands......from review swap.

This novel is addictive... the main character is a little thickheaded, but she's got nice reasons to be pissed. As for the other protagonist, there's a lot he's not telling. I won't spoil the surprise, but it is well worth a read. Can't wait to see how those two are going to handle that mess !

Wow 🤩. The novel is one of the most awesome novels I have ever read. The story idea, plot, theme and everything about the novel is 🔥🔥🔥🔥. Keep it up author, well done. I recommend this book💪💪💪💪

Probably the most disorganized book. It looks more the a draft than a book

This story is a total mess! Chapters are missing, duplicated or just don't make sense! Save your passes and coins and skip this one!

Overall this was an enjoyable short story/book. Only one thing at around Chapter 19 some of the chapters are not in order you must go the last chapter to read the few there to get the correct order. May want to consider not buy all the chapters after 18 as some are repeats and need to go to last chapter to for them.

Inconsistent story development, not just that chapters were duolicated and some were missing. Not enough detail to fully understand the characters, and the story skips over periods of time and many of the transitions from one scene to the next are abrupt and confusing

the story is good but the author should read the comments! for months, Chapter 21 and 22 are the same and an important content is missing there! So, I am sorry to have to write a bad review.