Reviews of Face-Slapping System
Face-Slapping System
StiffStick
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Author... At this moment your writing a journal or a diary rather than a Story. . The action fighting scene are bland and lack detail like bammm! Or wooooshh! ... I don't know what will happen bout many will irritate and drop this.. And all this time it's all MC's inner Monologue and the Paragraphs are being cut every sentence... This wi ruin the quality of your story TBH.. Currently reading in chap 116... I hope this will fixx and I'm expecting more for the development of MC.. thanks I really enjoy reading this..
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una novela un poco .... , demasiado cliche y un poco ..... ya saben ustedes. pero para pasar el rato, divierte lo suficiente. no es algo que te enganchara, y para otros talvez ya esten cansados de este tipo de novela, pero para muchos otros despues de haber leido algunas novelas oscuras, de villanos, o tragedias, con bastante drama, esta es lo suficientemente tranquilo a diferencia de esas otras. denle un intento, y si no les gusta pues que se va a hacer . xd
