Zerosky
Writing Quality: Minor grammar mistakes here and there but nothing too major. The only new novel I've read with proper sentence structure in quite some time. Story Development: The pace is good, a little hard to keep track of the timeline tho. As the story goes further, the MC is slowly getting involve in bigger and bigger mess. Character Design: The main character doesn't just kill blindly. He only kills when he knows there's little to no repercussions and have ingenious ways to solve the issues caused by the killings. Updating Stability: I have not much to say since I just picked it up. Hope it stays consistent tho. World Background: So far, it's centered on MC's academy but not much has been told. It is slowly moving into the kingdom the academy is in.
Had to give it a bit of a better review after reading a bit more. I read for a bit more and it's not the most amazing novel ever but it's definitely better than the generic arrogant MC novels. That being said, even though my rating improved, I do believe my previous review stands for the most part and I probably won't read more than these 119 chapters. However, if you're a new to intermediate reader with only a few dozen or hundred of these novels under your belt, it's still a decent read!
My disappointment is immeasurable. I like evil MC type novels since they subvert expectations and I REALLY tried giving this a chance but I'm at CH68 and I don't think I can keep going. The ONLY time the MC was "evil" was when he chopped off the head of a bully which was a dumb move to make considering the issues it unnecessarily caused for him. The only "save" was the BS of convincing a random elder magically to back him up after the dumb decision. The story tries to compensate for MC being a typical arrogant disciple follower character who is selfish just like any other typical cultivation MC but in this case, the author says that he does it "with an evil grin". It adds nothing to what he's doing. Somehow being a typical MC but with an evil grin makes them evil now lol
Voy por el 89 y es repugnante, el mc cambios de personalidad, a hablador, habla y habla cuando pelea con monstruos sin sentido, espero que cuendo Pelé contro otro cultivador no se un loro hablando y hablando, como no podrás escapar o me subestimas en alto, se empezo a enojar por estupideces y escriben un capitulo con información de lo que paso antes se la pelea despues de la pelea aburrido, no me interesa, futuro mc chino casi garantizado, los niveles de poder ya son incoherentes y raros, una trama detras muy pesada. ============Resumen:El mc es un perro faldero, a perdido crueldad e insensibilidad, y habla como un loro demasiado y es repugnante, lo editare si cambia
Honestly the story is quite good among the novels i have read recently as long as it can satisfy me for a while it would be good in my books since i am still on the search for more evil mc no harem type of novels the novel is great since the mc is a bit unique was impressed when the mc betrayed his master for his life since that is exactly the type of mc im looking for Although the story could be a bit better it can satisfy me and ive already read all the good evil mc novels so i cant really be too picky since my options are limited and all the other so called ."evil mcs". have harems and the authors keep trying to justify their actions like cmon cant you just be evil and not try to justify your actions? its really ticking me off
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