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EveryThing System (One Piece)

Author: ThotVictim
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What if someone with past life to be Tycoon rebirth on Multiuniverse? This is my FIRST TIME writing. so be easy on comment :') (This FANFICTION)

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The writing quality is pretty average with a lot of spelling mistakes, like for an instance "mommnet" instead of "moment" and so on which you would find pretty annoying if you have read as many light novels as I have. I would rate it 4/10. I can't say anything about the updates yet but hopefully the author will update every day. The story development is the usual basic cliche version with the MC's death and meets god scenario which has been used a lot and I mean a lot! We haven't heard anything about the MC personality yet but it seems very flat so far. The only good thing about this novel is that it's going to take place in the one piece world which is also why I have decide to give the author one ⭐

Eslyna
EslynaLv4Eslyna

Barely above one. Its dropped, grammer is not kind of bad like claimed, story development and building is also bad with some cliches, last character/world is egh and 2d even for MC...

The_One_Above_You
The_One_Above_YouLv5The_One_Above_You

slow releasing rate make me want to drop it so pls make it faster it's not that hard to write chapter per day so why are you too slow even if you got work to do it won't take 30-45 min to write a good chapter of 2000 words or even 2500 words

The_One_Above_You
The_One_Above_YouLv5The_One_Above_You

damn man i miss this too much continue i like this story too much also can you get him ino and karin as lovers can kill sai cause he isn't needed with mc here i believe that ino is the most beautiful girl and karin also with her glasses but your choice but can you consider my suggestion i think ino and karin is good for him than hinata or any young girl also no old women pls like tsunade or mei ..... make him like the others got a girl from same age

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GodharemZ
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So the writing quality is horrible ! Realse date is so slow ! THE STORY IS GOING NOWHERE ! THIS NOVEL IS STUPID AND BORING . DUDE JUST DROP IT ALREADY PLZ. ONE PIECE IN NARUTO U GOOD ?

Maurz
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Not even gonna read just putting this here because the very first word in this isn't even spelled correctly. ............................................................................................................................................................

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kenkaneki123
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hight999fantasy
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update update don t dropped harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem

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KieraRz
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Update every day off the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter

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Thesenileoldfool
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To be 100% honest! The only reason I'm giving this fanfiction 2 stars is because of some random dude who decided to rate this as a one star novel! Keep going author!! Don't let one bad review hold you down! The story is good so far but I hate that it is switching from first person to a third person narrator!! But overall it's actually good so give it a shot!

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