Reviews of Emross Empire : War And Order (Eng-V.)
Emross Empire : War And Order (Eng-V.)
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Shameless 5 stars review from me, I only read the first chapter and it feels too rush. Take it slow, explain the world building first and watch out for diction (ex: height 175 cm, not tall 175 cm) also the grammar or the structure of your sentence, maybe you need an editor. . Tetap semangat dan keep improving yourself to be a better writer. Podho wong Indo-ne tak dukung tok pokok๐
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As others have said, it is kind of a discount Sword Art Online. I only got to chapter 9 by this point, but I am going to drop it. The part I dislike the most, is that the game mechanics are hardly touched in the beginning. That is a big reason I like video game novels, there is a power standard and quantifiable growth, but these stats seem arbitrary. Movement speed is the biggest flag: he has 7 movement speed and run. (Successfully) from a monster with 20 movement speed. There is no indication that the monster has to make a detour around trees or something, but he out-runs it just fine.
Author you should be careful when choosing cover because sometimes readers come and read it because of the cover, it also sometimes resembles the character. And the mc, he should be mature than others like jin woo ur cover since he suffered early from both his parents. I know the mc got trauma but why make mc like super naive (yeah exaggerated) in the begging? It will be better if he was clever and smart. Ps: dont take this seriously as i am only expressing my thoughts about the story. Continue your gud work author!