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Emotion Rage: Enchanted World

Author: Xenovraise
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"SON, CONTROL YOUR EMOTION!" This is a story of a human who lived on earth but was suddenly teleported to a place called the Enchanted World. It was never an accident, it was an answer. But what lies ahead in this very place called Enchanted world? Is it wonders? Peace? Bliss? Fulfillment? Paradise? Or malice... Everyday, this 21 year old young man asks for a new world for him as he always hated himself living on earth. His self esteem is going down the drain every steps he take, every eyes that happen to meet his, every glance from a person towards him. He hated the world, he despised what was becoming of him. Although... as a child, he was gifted. But what happened to this gifted child? It so happened that he existed in the wrong world. He was cheated on, deceived, abused, bullied, unloved, and disregarded. Why did such a jolly person turned out the way he is now? Because of one thing he misunderstood... EMOTION. He lost some of his memories upon arriving to a different world, an Enchanted World. The new appearance he had made him think that he was just dreaming, "Aw! Wait-... Woah Woah woah! What is this! It's not a dream?!"

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Okay so since there's only one chapter to go off of I can't really say much. The story and the world has been established smoothly which is good. MC wakes up in a new world with a body 5 years younger than his original. Character-wise, Vula has been developed nicely, even moreso than the MC Ceraun imo. I'm not sure if this was your intention or the characters natural speech pattern, but some of the dialogue is a bit choppy. (e.g "I'll explain to you everything, Now listen close, very closely.We only have 30 minutes all in all for me to explain it to you. Sit down here, kid!") Instead of mashing all those details into a single speech bubble, you could spread them out a bit between actions and make add some detail around them. For example Vula could be like: "I'll explain everything to you, now listen close" *Ceraun stood idly in shock over the sudden turn of his life* "We only have 30 minutes all in all for me to explain it to you! Sit down, kid!" Sorry this review was a bit long, but since there was only one chapter I couldn't really review much and just decided to give some suggestions! Keep going, its pretty good start so far!

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So there goes my 5 stars. I have reasons why I voted my own story 5 stars. Because this story is not only original but it is my very own concept, idea, and plot. Not inclined with the usual storyline such as martial arts etc. I've did that from my first work. But this one is different, it is a much more anticipated and thrilling where I can say myself that the story will have a great story development and unexpected twists. This is not your daily goody novel where it feeds you what you expect. Just be ready to feel mixed emotions as you delve into it. I'm telling you. I warned you. Enjoy Emotion Rage, be sure not to be controlled by your emotions...

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