SHIVAM_Chouksey
As a person who like to read dual cultivation, this is my 2nd best dual cultivation i ever read, the plot is interesting and different from dual cultivation, start from trash to hero type also nice, and system to boot which make's it perfect i guess. but the only thing is the poorly grammar that literally destroying this masterpiece. pls author get an editor and proofreader for this. I'm having a hard time cracking my brain to read this
Finally was able to read the next chapter 892!! I still live this book and dont want it to end! But there r some things that I hope to see like I hope the MC will be able to help the girls awaken bloodlines too because if he goes to fight the war like hes supposed to later on that will kill everyone they wont be powerful enough to do so with just regular bloodlines!! So when that all reach the highest realm Y not have it so the MC is able to help them break through and awaken there bloodline so they can be stronger!! And y not let the MC tell his mother and grandfather EVERYTHING that is going on and what will happen so this way they know and all the girls he trusts 100 percent and have become his partners! And after everything is said y not have have his mothe be with him scenes technically they dont have the same bloodline anymore because his just changed and became better but thats only IF his father is dead witch I kinda hope he is because he is stupid and doesnt do anything and his level isnt even high hes better off not even being in the book anymore! I know its mean to say but its the truth! So this is just my thoughts but I hope to see them come true and hope that everyone that is at least close to the MC survives and lives forever with him and they all can be a family and I hope that most of the girls that he saved will become so strong that most of them wont die and that the MC goes around helping any and all the girls like this and even some families and people that need it so that if any of the girls or people from his planet dont want to fight he can make up the numbers by having other people from other planets can be used in there place and protected and the MC can offer protection to the other planets so they will fight for him! But I truly just want to see the MC and all the girls he saved and even the ones in the future and even other people that need to be saved or r willing to help him and join him can stay alive and live there lifes for the rest of there lifes with out any dangers after that! so basically I just want to see the MC save his planet at least but only save the people that deserve to be saved and that deserve to live! And I hipe that the MC can have plenty of time with his family and I hope that his family all survive and will be safe and the girls and people that deserve to be saved!!
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
I HOPE THE AUTHOR SEES THIS AND TAKES THIS INTO CONSIDERATION IF THIS UR BOOK THAT U R WRITING!! ITS SO GREAT AND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! I just got done reading chapter 865 and this book is still awesome!! I still cant get enough of this book!!! I do have a couple suggestions on a couple things in the future that I hope u take into consideration!!! I hope nothing happened to fangs mom and then when all of the girls r back at the clan including the girls they saved and even the girls with the dragon and the ones they went to save they all go to 1 room and have the MC tell them what happened all these times from to point of when they came back from the poison sect or when he disappeared till now!! This way they can know what happened and sense these would be the people he trusts 100 percent then he can show them the dragon and thw sub space and all that. and disnt hos blood change or something so cant he be with his mother even if he has the same blood ot doesnt matter he can still be with her!! The MC should have the girls that he trust 100 percent be the main girls and have thw girls find him girls that they like because they helped in some way or did something or whatever and bring them to him and see if he would welcome them into there group to help them out more and then they should find the most special spirit roots to take in and they should find the strongest and the ones with the best attitudes to be able to lead so they can be in the in the 100 percent group that he trust and this way they will be the strongest and some will lead his army and others will manage other this and so on and so forth...