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Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan

A lot Dragon Ball Z fan-fics are usually thrown away. So I made one, and I did try. I didn't want to make a wack novel so I really tried. first time writing so useful critics would be nice 1 chapter a day, every chapter is 1,000+ words will probably make this summary better one day Also I don't own the Dragon ball story. And I will never have claimed to have owned it NO HAREM. :) Also in the first Volume mc won’t be OP and thats because he is still a child, and his body hasn’t reached its peak.

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Chapter 7

I used Grammarly on this chapter, so do tell me if it is better and easy to comprehend. :)

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You can see what looks to be a small child sitting on the plains. He is wearing no upper clothes but his lower body is encased in what looks to be animal hide as pants. His appearance resembles a monkey with all the fur covering his body as well as the tail that he has. He has hair similar to Super Saiyan Goku's but of course not golden. But one of the captivating characteristics about him would be his eyes, pupils colored red and as dark blood.

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Sage-'this is far more difficult than I would have liked. Even after 3 years of meditating, I can only keep control of 5 ki orbs.'

Thinking that you see sage sitting on the ground with 5 ki orbs floating around him with his body as the center. A second later you can see what looks like a 6th ki orb form. After Sage adds the 6th ki orb he starts sweating, and within a minute the ki orbs start to deform before exploding. Destroying the ground in a circle, and leaving sage with a lot of bruises from the impact.

Sage-"Damn, that hurt. It seems I can at best control 5 ki orbs fluently. But what about in battle when my focus is distracted, Will I still have that much control?"

Thinking about stuff like that I look up into the sky wondering how my first battle will be. Will it be tough? Will I die? Will my enemy die? Thinking about fighting I can feel my heart pounding in excitement at the prospect of fighting.

Sage-'Not only is my body craving for a fight, but so am I. I really can't wait, but my father said I can only fight when I have passed the baby's growth period. When will that be over with?'

While staring into the sky and about to go to sleep, I suddenly felt ki rivaling my own. I stand up tense ready for a possible battle, when I try to focus on the ki I find it feeling familiar and calm down realizing it's my mother.

Zucci-"SAGE. HURRY UP IT'S LUNCHTIME."

Sage-"Coming mother."

Replying to my mother quickly, I stand up and dust myself off and start running in the direction of my mother. What? You thought I could fly. Nope, I have never tried, I mean I want to try and fly but I am scared that if I use too much ki and launch myself into orbit before I figure out how to stop myself I will have already died from lack of oxygen. So I decided I will learn to control my ki before I try dangerous stuff like flying.

After a few minutes of running, I came across our little 'home' as my parents call it, but it's just a cave with a few different rooms inside.

Sage-"Mom. Dad. I'm here, what's for lunch? Is it boar again?"

Onon-"We are inside."

Hearing the answer I walk deeper into the cave and come to find my mother and father eating already.

Sage-"You guys are going to eat all of it before I can get any!"

Saying that I hurry and grab a huge chunk of meat that is probably half my size and start eating it quickly, drinking water whenever I need to so I don't choke.

Zucci-"hahaha. Then you should be quicker next time. It's not my fault you were slow."

Onon-"Your mother started eating first and I wasn't just going to watch her eat all the food I hunted."

Hearing the answers from my parents I just look at them blankly. Now that I think about it, my parents are weird. . . Let me rephrase this thought, my parents are weird for Saiyans. Not only do my parents love each other, which is very hard to find considering almost all Saiyans only care about fighting and their strength. They are like completely different beings altogether!

Take my mother for example. She has a hotheaded personality, she loves fighting more than most Saiyans apparently, and she is cruel when it comes to battle. How do I know this, well when I was still getting breastfed I would overhear my mother talking about the battles she fought and she would smile whenever she went into detail about her enemies' screams when torturing them.

Now my father. He is calm and cool-minded which I find very surprising considering he is a Saiyan. He enjoys fights, just not as much as my mother. But most importantly I found out that my father is very good at reading people's thoughts through just their expressions alone. Apparently because of that talent he is knowledgeable in a lot of different subjects.

But the one thing I know that they have in common would be their affection for me. And I love them too but I know a lot of Saiyans don't have good family relationships so I get thankful thinking my parents love me.

Onon-"All right, sage me and your mother have decided that it is time for you to start receiving training."

My father snapped me out of my thoughts. Hearing what my father said, I just looked at him so excitedly that I unconsciously wagged my tail back and forth, thinking that I could finally fight. So in a happy mood, I hurriedly asked them.

Sage-"Does that mean I can fight those beasts now!."

Zucci-"Nope."

Hearing that my happy mood vanishes, while my tail slumps onto the ground beside me.

Zucci-"We said training not battle your still a few years too young. So before that, I and your father shall train you before we allow you to battle those beasts."

Hearing what my mother said I regained some of my happiness and asked them when training would start.

Sage-"So when will my training start?"

Zucci-"right now!"

Saying that I see my mother pick me up by my arm and fly in another direction. After my mother has flown for a couple of minutes I notice that it is getting harder to breathe and the gravity seems to have increased as well. Another few minutes later my mother lands and throws me a few meters in front of her.

I try to stand up but I notice it's far harder than before, after a minute I manage to stand up, but I am out of breath. The air here is really thin so It's really hard to get any oxygen into my lungs, and to top it all off the heat is practically unbearable. I have only been here for 1 or 2 minutes but I am already sweating.

Looking up I see my father standing next to my mother while they are both looking at me.

Onon-"let me check how much his power has grown."

Saying that I watch my father walk over to the space pod that he brought over. After fiddling around my father walks back and you can hear the space pod scanning me.

[Scanning.... Target scanned..power level… 40,000]

While that may look high, don't forget what I am. For me an increase of 15,000 in only 3 years is pathetic. But then again I have never trained to get stronger. I have been focusing on mastering the basics of ki, which I can confidently say I have succeeded in these 3 years.

Onon-"*whistle* An increase of 15,000 and you haven't even started training yet. Imagine what the increase will be after training for a year."

Zucci-"HAHAHAHA. That is my son, so powerful and hasn't even trained a day in his life. That so-called super-elite prince Vegeta could never compare to my son."

Hearing them talk about me like that makes me a little happy, and I am excited to see the results after training for one year.

Sage-"So who will be training me first?"

Onon-"First you must get used to the gravity and climate, then we will officially start your training, do note though this gravity is only 4x what you are used to."

Hearing what my father said I do some quick calculations and realize this is about 400x times earth gravity. I know you must be thinking it's a lot considering Goku could barely even stand on king kai's planet, and that planet's gravity is the same as Planet Vegeta's. But you must understand I am an ancient legendary Saiyan so my physique far outclasses a normal Saiyans, and besides I was born on the sector of the planet with gravity 10x planet Vegeta so a 4x increase of what I am used to will be quite easy to adapt to.

Now here comes some Tough training.

Sage-'Hehehehehe I am so excited.'

yolo I'm hungry again.

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