Help

Please check my auxiliary chapters as the last one titled "Possible end" will greatly help me. I've uploaded it months ago and haven't received a single comment or suggestion which shows how much the auxiliary chapters just get passed over. It'll be the turning point for me to either focus my free time on this or to stop wasting my time on it and try something new. Please comment on the individual paragraphs that are related to your comment as it'll help me better understand what you're directing it towards. Thank you all and thank you for your help. I look forward to it as soon as possible.