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Douluo Dalu: Path of Immortal.

Author: Greymark
Book&Literature
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What is Douluo Dalu: Path of Immortal.

Read Douluo Dalu: Path of Immortal. fanfiction written by the author Greymark on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Book&Literature fanfic stories, covering romance, reincarnation, cultivation, douluodalu, witcher. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Well, the name and setting are more or less what this fan-fic is about. A man of about twenty got reincarnated in Douluo story, the same age as Tang San. The story is mostly original and I changed some facts from canon on purpose. MC is OP, but he will have his own share of OP enemies that were never present in canon. I made the universe way broader in some sense just for that. Note: this story is already 100k words long. When I finish posting them, it will go on temporary hiatus, as I won't write it until another fanfic on witcher world is finished. Writing is my hobby and I don't plan to stop as it is rather easy and entertaining for me.

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LiaFeil
LiaFeilLv4LiaFeil

Well, I've never given 2 reviews for one novel. this is my first time doing it. As I said before, at the beginning, this story is good, then in the middle, it becomes like an unreasonable and forced rubbish, then in the end (ch58) it gets better (but still feels a bit absurd and forced which may be ignored). So my assessment for this novel is, if you can survive many unreasonable and forced things at the beginning of the story, you will find something good and interesting later.

Greymark
GreymarkAuthorGreymark

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LiaFeil
LiaFeilLv4LiaFeil

This was good in the beginning, but after a few chapters, everything started to feel strange, absurd and forced ... Especially in the arc Spirit hall move ... or maybe when he went to a human city for the first time ... Honestly, that very bad ... At least in my opinion ...

DivinDragonEmperor
DivinDragonEmperorLv5DivinDragonEmperor

this is an AU of the famous douluo dalu/soul land. it's an AU of the first one i.e Tang San, the author has clearly thought out and planned what to write which is reflected in the quality of the chapters, flow of the novel and future plot. the mc isn't a side character and has his own adventures, he isn't weak like tang san and is actually abnormal for his age. the author has also added different elements and things which weren't present in the original novel like demons, spirit beast clans and 9 guardian/legacy spirit beasts.

skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv13skulputulurubug

Okay... Author clarified that first 30 chapters are brainless stupid senseless utter garbage that will make sense later on... but I can literally feel my brain melting right now... 20 chapters in and I ask myself why use Soul land when you add stupid demons and random bull ****... I like fanfics that expand the world and don't revolve around OG mc but this demons crap is just ****ting all over the original work you could've expanded your powers differently have hidden sects another continent ffs but demons crap... that only your mc a 3 year old orphan and intellectual beasts were able to discover? And the only other humans who know are slaves? Why didn't you just make an original work ffs... I really need to rant cause the 21 chapters I read are so fucking stupid

ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageLv4ClearSkySage

loved this one man, I am a huge fan of Duoluo Dalu so any fanfic is generally welcome but this one has such a great story and quality I just hope you explore more the higher realms this is the one thing that I felt lacking about the original I want more things about the realm of gods and above.

LaurentCross
LaurentCrossLv13LaurentCross

Story was really good up to chapter 20 then it went completely downhill everything felt forced and It wasn't entertaining or good I honestly tried to continue but ending up dropping at chapter 32. Especially how he dosent seek revenge pisses me off total buzzkill you honestly made your mc a generic nice guy wich ruined it for me.

1LiQiYe1
1LiQiYe1Lv101LiQiYe1

"Mc is op but will have op enemies". I hope you won't make everyone op just because the mc is op. I read a fanfiction once where he made the mc op so he made everyone else op which completely ruined the point in making the mc op.

Areader001
Areader001Lv1Areader001

A you poor ****, you just have to create stupid things and now you agitated a certain reader. I'm not so sorry though, this thing you created is just nasty and not good. You don't know how to write so stop writing. Retard

Phoenix_Paradise
Phoenix_ParadiseLv5Phoenix_Paradise

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WormDragon
WormDragonLv4WormDragon

Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that. Take that.

ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageLv4ClearSkySage

For example, that baboon was the famous Thrice Reckless Mad Saber! It was a surprise discovering that Senior Thrice Reckless was an enlightened baboon. After going back, it could boast about its deeds to his fellow baboons.

Anish_Kumar_6194
Anish_Kumar_6194Lv14Anish_Kumar_6194

please keep on posting.It is the best fanfic for Douluo dalu. Its update schedule is nice till now.Pleas don't drop it. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Bala_Prakash
Bala_PrakashLv4Bala_Prakash

Awesome stroyline excellent narrations of charatcers and plotlines!!!!??? Author I beg of you don't drop the novel in midways pls complete😇😇😇😇😇😇

WormDragon
WormDragonLv4WormDragon

Author should just put this in the novel section and not in here. This has completely different concept than the original............... ..

WormDragon
WormDragonLv4WormDragon

You should have created your own novel so that no one can complain what you do with it. A fan fiction by the way is creating something base on the original story. Meaning you base how the vibe of the whole story to what you create and not create something altogether. Again, you should have created your own novel.

OOA
OOALv14OOA

Well the novel is good one of the best but the only thing i don't like about the story is how Na'er is killed and theres also alot of **** in this story but apart from that the story is good and don't let my personal view trouble you just not a fan of **** and death of loved ones thats all. Keep up the good work.

Yami_01
Yami_01Lv4Yami_01

I really enjoyed the story but starting needs to be edited I guess only from my point of view but after that story keep getting more interesting and I really enjoyed MC felling all emotion even if he didn't want to and MC is not too Op so good for story to progress and the changes in the story did the trick and best of all good work for giving mass release I really read for 2 days straight. Thank You Author San.

Pimple_Face_13
Pimple_Face_13Lv4Pimple_Face_13

It’s really good... Ok I really suck at reviews Powers are great, I especially love nexus Mc is smart and hopefully doesn’t become a Pokémon trainer World building is amazing the introduction of demons is great. Not much character development yet Best part is the author skips the cliche, cringe ROB meeting. Overall I like it. Can’t wait for new chapters.

goldzi
goldziLv5goldzi

forced myself to read but no more. plot too much forced like someone warping reality (author) and mystery **** its not for me thats why ım reading fanfic new elements for fic welcomed but this much is not for me author if you reading this you might want to add tag (dark) (orginalcrossover) its pretty much misleading for people want to read your everyday fanfic

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