Pure_Blood_Peasant
Yeah the story had a ton of potential but well it isnt good at all. The MCs name is cringe and doesnt make sense since he isnt a Dr but a food truck owner.... “Dr. Phoenix” cringe. The story DESPERATELY needs an editor because even the names are wring 95% of the time. The MC in his first meeti g with Natasha has Tony spill the beans and then he does nothing lol guy can literally obliviate all of them but nah just poor writing. COMPLETE WASTE OF TIME.
well I love the MC character in this and he is following the script to the letter with some extras on the side I love the interaction between ancient one and him going on. He is has the knowledge of whole life of albus dumbledore it has to count for something. Friendship between him and Tony that's awesome and many adventures yet to come....😎
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