Nickaido
I would honestly have to say in its current form this stands to be one of the best books in here, I could easily relate its unique qualities to some the top stories the only true complaint I have is that it's drawn me in so much that I have caught up to the last page and stuck waiting on the edge of my seat for the next page. The little cliffhangers left per page is enough to keep you coming back for my but the progression and character development has left me in the view of just 1 page a day is no where near enough. sometimes your left trying to picture what happens next based of the previous info and its not simple to picture the next page. I've become the fry meme (shut up and take my money)
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The story starts out well enough even with the grammatical issues, the Mc kills people who cross him or makes them handicapped, but all of a sudden the most antagonistic person to him who helps kidnap his sister he literally frees from prison for no reason. Later the “hero” tries to kill or maim basically everyone he loves and once again he can easily kill him and beats him but let’s him go, it leads you to believe maybe the mc and him have some sort of deal or something. Later he tries to kill one of his fiancés just to get back at the mc so clearly that can’t be the case unless it’s just going to be magically explained away, then they again fight but don’t worry for reasons no one knows they’re equal all of sudden (it’s stated many times that the mc is stronger than him until randomly poof Leonardo is just as strong because….. reasons) keep in mind the mc has op af buffs that are only possible for him such as farming stats without leveling or stealing monsters abilities (even though he rarely ever does unless it’s some op random boss character), but don’t worry for the plot he once again lets the guy get away who is still clearly trying to kill him and cause him harm. It’s established there are bigger badder villains Leonardo is basically a pointless character after turning evil that feels like he can’t die because reasons (he has ties to the mc in past and their gifts are linked) honestly it makes it just goofy at so many points because the mc will murder bandits or any human that crosses him, but the bully who harassed and tries to kill or kidnap his family is constantly spared. Makes it unreadable
I’ve gotta be honest. This novel is one of my fav so far. It reminds me of the anime Arifureta as the mc are the weakest at the beginning of the plot but surely and slowly becoming the strongest. The same concept, have harem and interesting plot. But the grammar is poorly done that I have fed up reading this novel. From the first chap I feel headache just by reading several line of text. So yeah I’m sorry but I’m dropping this.
Don’t read if you hate poor writing and an author that doesn’t care. The world is interesting and the characters are of a high quality, however there is so many basic mistakes, misnaming characters, giving them new names that had never been introduced to us, incredibly basic math fails(we’re talking 90+20=120) with the author always claiming in the comments. ”I’ll fix it.” spoiler alert, he doesn’t care enough to fix it, he promised in the comments earlier on that there are less mistakes as you read it, but as of chapter 40 the mistakes are getting more frequent, not less. If you can deal with poor writing then this book is for you, if you can’t go read anything else.
standard isekai, its not bad bad but nothing outstanding with alot of skippable chapters. allot of things feel forced, mc trashing the princes of a empire because she is not nice to him. but later we should belive that mc is smart. lvl system is standard boring. there are alot of parts that do nothing for the story or charecter Development. it feels like a filler to get from a to c.
Yo Nickaido, for a moment what do you think of my Ranking System and its description on my book [Banana Bus Squad x Isekai] in webnovel. It is kinda simiar to yours but slightly different. The Ranking System you will looking for is located at the very top of the Chapter lists, at the auxilitary chapter