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Here are five stars for you. An amazing first-person narration. I am amazed by the author's quirkiness of portraying the prologue by their voice and not just outright telling it. A unique way of doing it and it was enjoyable. Kudos! The potential for this one is sky high so prepare yourself for more recognition shortly. Amazing and great book you've got!
This is such a beautiful novel. The concept of the plot is extremely unique and just as amazing. I've never read something like this before, I must say, I'm intrigued. There were quite a few errors throughout, some a bit more obvious than some but the book was easy to understand nonetheless. The spacing of the paragraphs were a bit off but I guessed it was the author's own writing structure. Overall, this novel is a masterpiece. I love everything so far, from the plot to the characters. This author has a very nice way with words, most sentences were a lot like poetry. I really liked it. [img=recommend]
Interesting concept! I really like how the symbols added in each sentences and chapters brings vibrant imagery to the ironic fate that each character portrays (the cursed baby and the prince part is amazing). But I do think that some sentences needs editting, just like what I had mentioned from the comments. You also need to avoid using Ellipsis too often. Plus, you also need to capitalise every first letter when starting with a sentence. Kudos for the author!