enthu_reader
I love the book so much. The plot is amazing and runs smoothly. I just hope they arrest all the bad guys. The ML is awesome even though heās blind. However, heās smart, brave, and a great hero and friend. Heās an army guy, so heās perfect. I hope he could regain his sight back. The FL is brave and badass. Great chemistry between the ML and FL. I would refer this book to any patient reader.
I am in so so so so much with this story! The prologue alone had me hooked right away and when we were introduced to Bai Lin and Xin Lei and OH MY GOD.... I could only praise the author for sketching them like this... I was rooted to the story right away... had to force myself to stop to leave a review and sleep cuz it's way past midnight for me.... Though I had to accept that it's kinda hard to get attached to the character again when POV jumps from one character to the other... but I am willing to read it further because the story is just amazinggggggg ā¤ā¤ā¤
Author I still haven't read the story but I trust you because I simply loved your other novel" because I simply love you" And I love mystery crime and romance but still am more focused towards the dark side so my family call me a psycho even though all I want to do is help people out from that dark side. I am really happy you are writing this genre as there are not many. Hope you don't drop this ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Read the first few chapters before this review and I must admit that it's good. Still unclear about a few things, which I believe would become clearer as I read further and the description gives a nice image. Grammar is done well, as nothing seem out of place so far and the plot is a curious one. Nice work!
Engaging story. I have no really complaints neither about the grammar or your writing style which at least on my opinion looks pretty solid. I see why some people complained about point of view changes I got the same problem in my first novel... Some people like it, some people don't, but it is not something to penalize you on. Good luck author.
Read up to chapter 10 before leaving a review, so this speaks more to my initial reactions: I must admit that I'm not personally a fan of switching between point of views, but I think you definitely did what you could to make it work. However, it was a bit confusing to keep track at times since I hadn't expected it if you hadn't noted in the author's note. Also, this was more of a personal first impression, but the usage of single quotes and double quotes to denote thoughts was a bitttt confusing initially. But other than those two points which were entirely personal opinion (please take with like a cupppp of salt like not even a pinch of salt), I liked the pacing and the dynamics.