Review Detail of Jenjibread in Crimson Instinct

Read up to chapter 10 before leaving a review, so this speaks more to my initial reactions: I must admit that I'm not personally a fan of switching between point of views, but I think you definitely did what you could to make it work. However, it was a bit confusing to keep track at times since I hadn't expected it if you hadn't noted in the author's note. Also, this was more of a personal first impression, but the usage of single quotes and double quotes to denote thoughts was a bitttt confusing initially. But other than those two points which were entirely personal opinion (please take with like a cupppp of salt like not even a pinch of salt), I liked the pacing and the dynamics.