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Common Sense Manipulation System

Johnny is a young man who has continually struggled in life. Nothing seems to go his way, as his mother died a few years ago, leaving him with no one to call family. He has since been working a dead-end gas station job and just a few days ago, got fired. He now stands in his apartment, holding a rope in his hands. ‘What is the point? No one loves me, I’m still a virgin at 21, and I can’t even hold a damn job.’ He thought miserably. Just as he was about to do something he might regret; he heard an audible ding before a pink and blue screen appeared in front of him. [Congratulations! You have been selected by the universe to be the beta tester of our new program called: Common Sense Manipulation System! You have been chosen because of your miserable life and virgin status! But do not worry young man, with this system you can finally become someone worth a damn! Fame! Money! Beautiful women! The possibilities are endless!] ——————————————- Every Character is above the age of 18! NO YURI! NO NTR! I try to publish at least 1 chapter a day… Please support me with power stones and reviews. I like watching that funny little view number go up. ;) Also, don’t be afraid to add to your collection and leave some chapter comments. If you have any suggestions for scenes or characters, please let me know. I’ll try to be as accommodating as possible! Cover art is A.I. Generated ;)

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Chapter 20 Bathhouse

Arriving at the entrance to Vanessa's vagina, Johnny gave one last warning. "I'm going to enter you now, try to hold on your moans…"

With that, he stuck his duck inside her, causing cute sounds to escape her mouth. Grasping her ass, Johnny began to thrust himself in and out, making his dick drown in pleasure. 'Fuck… She feels different than Samantha…' He observed.

*Mmmhhh* Vanessa moaned out. 'This treatment feels so good…' She thought as love juices started spilling from her hole…

*Smack*

Johnny began smacking her ass as he penetrated her, hoping that the changes he made to her mind would allow him to do so unimpeded. Thankfully, she seemed to be preoccupied with moaning, and didn't pay any attention to Johnny's smacks. 'Great…' He thought as his dick made squelching sounds when pounding her pussy.

Putting his hands on her hips, Johnny began to thrust harder, causing louder and louder moans to release from Vanessa.

"I-im… *Mmh* Im cumming!" Vanessa moaned out, digging her nails into the mat.

However, even though Vanessa was going through an intense orgasm, Johnny didn't stop as he wasn't close yet. "Keep holding on Vanessa, the treatment is almost finished." He said while grabbing Vanessa's ponytail to keep her from falling.

Speeding up, Johnny prioritized his own pleasure instead of Vanessa's sanity. With every thrust she was shaking, in a constant state of immense pleasure. 'I'm gonna go crazy!' She thought with a face of ecstasy, not minding Johnny's rough treatment of her.

Johnny felt himself about to cum, and sped up. But right before he came, he pulled out and shot his seed all over Vanessa's back.

"Fuck…" He cursed as he closed his eyes.

*breath*

Through bated breaths, he sat back, leaving Vanessa to collapse onto the yoga mat. After a moment to gather himself, he spoke. "The treatment is over. Y-You should be cured now, but I will check again during our next session just in case."

Struggling to speak, Vanessa squealed out, "T-thank you instructor…" 'I hope I'm okay now…'

"This will conclude our session for today. Get cleaned up before you leave. I have other matters to attend to." Johnny said before getting up to clean himself off and leave.

After entering the bathroom, he saw a familiar pink and blue screen appear in front of him.

{Achievement Earned: Doggy Style! Have sex with someone in the doggy style position! 200 Manipulation Points have been added to your status!}

'Only one achievement? I thought pulling her hair would give me one too… Well I guess it's better than nothing…' Johnny thought as he cleaned his dick off.

***

After cleaning up, Johnny found himself sitting on a workout bench outside of the communal bathhouse. He was currently tossing a pair of 3D glasses in his hand while speaking with Aurora.

[So what did you have in mind?] Aurora asked, curious about Johnny's plan.

*sigh* 'Well, I was thinking of using a few conditions in my Common Sense Manipulation to become basically invisible. Then after that, use some kind of ability to have the hottest women in the room become my clients' Johnny said.

[Not a bad idea, but it's going to be very expensive. The conditions you use to lower the cost must be pretty restrictive.] Aurora advised.

'Yeah I know, I'm just ironing out the details right now…' Johnny said while thinking of how to manipulate common sense.

'Alright, I got it.' Johnny thought before he tried to use the CSMS.

'Whenever I am wearing these glasses, it is normal for people to not acknowledge or perceive my presence for 1 hour during the daytime…'

*Ding*

Hearing the change's success, he quickly checked on his points.

Manipulation Points: 1350

'Only 450… not bad.' He thought before attempting to change common sense once more.

'4 times per week, whenever I whisper a command in someone's ear, they will subconsciously obey it.'

*Ding*

Smiling, Johnny checked his stats once more only for his expression to turn into a frown.

Manipulation Points: 0

'That cost all of my points?! What the hell?' Johnny exclaimed. He didn't intend for it to be that expensive.

[Well dumbass, you are basically giving yourself 4 free changes to someone's common sense every week. Even if it can't be used too often, you should be surprised that it only costs that much…] Aurora said, annoyed at Johnny's stupidity.

'Oh… when you put it like that, it makes sense. Still, I didn't plan for that, but I guess I can still work with this…' He thought as he put on the 3D glasses.

[You look stupid with those on…] Aurora commented.

'It's a good thing then that you are the only one who can see me…' Johnny replied as he pushed open the door to the bathhouse.

What lay behind the door was a vast open room. Small pools could be seen here and there, filled with naked women. There were also small seats positioned in front of mirrors, letting women tend to their looks and chat with one and other. Shower heads lined some of the walls, letting occupants wash off before they leave. Steam covered most of the floor, giving the bathhouse a warm, comforting feeling…

'This is…' Johnny thought as he laid eyes upon all the naked women. It wasn't an overstatement to say that the gym got most of its members due to this bathhouse. He didn't even realize just how many people used this place… 'So many options…' He thought, browsing his selection of bodies.

Johnny's plan was relatively simple. Using the glasses, he would move undetected through the room and search for the hottest women. Once found, he would whisper a command in their ear to sign up for his yoga sessions. This would not only earn him more money, but allow him to prey on even more sexy females…

Rubbing his hands together with anticipation, Johnny started walking around. 'Thank you CSMS. With this, I can gain so many more points…'

Updates are going to slow down as I have just started college. Will still try to release at least 1 chapter a day, but no promises…

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