Cie-Lbitch
Hi author, Upon reading your work, I was astonished to read fresh words and spice to your writing however, please be mindful of the grammatical errors as well as spelling. Re-check your draft and correct them. I see that this work of yours is really interesting and how you play with words are really commendable. I also noticed that your chapter name is not catching my attention, I would recommend if you would name them base on the chapter's main topic/event. The way you built the world was great too, and I'm looking forward for reading more of what's in your world. Please continue updating and Goodluck. Regards, Glenstonx
I highly recommend this book! Even if there is some few grammatical faults, you barely can notice them while reading. I personally did not remark them until i read the first chapters for a second time. and Of course, the fact that I re-read the book, It obviously shows how much it is amazing and I feel so attached to it. I'm in love with the character Naiah! She is super dope! They way she thinks is just😂. It reminds me of myself and my clumsiness a looot. 🤦♀️ And again... YOU DON'T WANNA MISS SUCH A CHEF-D'OEUVRE!!!💜
👏👏 Really enjoyed binge reading this! I’m curious to see what’s gonna go down next. Just like any story, there are grammar and spelling mistakes, but I don’t really care because I was too interested in the story haha :) Some work could be done on the backstory; I found it a little hard to keep up at times. Sometimes flashbacks weren’t defined clearly enough—as there Were a few errors in consistency when it came to tenses. Nonetheless, I really loved reading this, and I recommend anyone reading to give it a go! I’ll be keeping a look out for update. :)
Wow! Such a dept of emotions. The anguish we hear in the female lead screams...the author did a good job of capturing the essence of her feelings. Im thinking of our female lead in the lines of a rising phoenix. As said by the author in the preface there were minor flaws, however it doesnt overthrow the plot. good job author