Reviews of Civilization
Civilization
DaoistZqipHd
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- Character Design
- world background
Over all great story wish that more chapters were released more frequently that is the only down side. All I whant to do is give you more money for more chapters.
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Okay, so I’m someone who literally never comments on anything and this book is so good that I decided I had to absolutely recommend it. Like, I’m broke and still collected Pennie’s inorder to purchase chapters lol. Although, at times it does feel “slow” I think it’s always enjoyable and builds up the world/characters well. If you’re thinking about reading it, just close the comments and start. Give this book a try, cause you won’t regret it. Trust me.
The first review I have ever written even though I have 3 years of constant reading following me. This is just too good. Like, I would give it a 6-star rating if I could. Just... Please... At least a chapter a day. Please. The only complaint I have. I even voted for it, even though I never do it. Idk what it does tho. Hope it helps.
Finally caught up. Really great book, would equate to The World Online. Writing Quality: Great writing quality. Some misspellings here and there, but great writing. Story Development: Great pacing. Slowly building up to bigger stakes. Everything in-game feels earned after some hard work. Everything IRL feels realistic and alive. Character Design: MC, feels solid. He puts in work does research and asks questions. He actually puts in the effort. His IRL friends feel real to, with there own history and baggage waiting to unfold. The NPCs feel realistic to the game world. Update Stability: Just caught up, don't know the schedule. World Building: Picture a first person worldwide real time Civ5 game. That's the game they play. There are events, guilds trying to create a monopoly and people just trying to figure out the LORE. Check replies.
alright bois CIV IV time!!!! BABA YETU, yetu uliye Mbinguni yetu, yetu, amina Baba yetu, yetu, uliye Jina lako litukuzwe Baba yetu, yetu uliye Mbinguni yetu, yetu, amina Baba yetu, yetu, uliye Jina lako litukuzwe Utupe leo chakula chetu Tunachohitaji utusamehe Makosa yetu, hey Kama nasi tunavyowasamehe Waliotukosea, usitutie Katika majaribu, lakini Utuokoe, na yule, milele na milele Baba yetu, yetu uliye Mbinguni yetu, yetu, amina Baba yetu, yetu, uliye Jina lako litukuzwe Baba yetu, yetu uliye Mbinguni yetu, yetu, amina Baba yetu, yetu, uliye Jina lako litukuzwe Ufalme wako ufike utakalo Lifanyike duniani kama mbinguni, amina Baba yetu, yetu uliye Mbinguni yetu, yetu, amina Baba yetu, yetu, uliye Jina lako litukuzwe Baba yetu, yetu uliye Mbinguni yetu, yetu, amina Baba yetu, yetu, uliye Jina lako litukuzwe Utupe leo chakula chetu Tunachohitaji utusamehe Makosa yetu, hey Kama nasi tunavyowasamehe Waliotukosea, usitutie Katika majaribu, lakini Utuokoe na yule msiba milele Baba yetu, yetu, uliye Jina lako litukuzwe Baba yetu, yetu, uliye Jina lako litukuzwe
Really enjoying the story. Although the complete story is being told in a video game setting the emotions and interactions don't feel artificial. Though I sometimes do feel the MC gets too melodramatic but I can just blame it on the game's immersion. I do have some questions for the author 1. Will the plot have any real world implications. 2. If the marks and pain from the game does not point to future real world implications the will those plot points have any progress. 3. No matter what what kind of agreement you make your use sign, a game like this might leave some deep trauma after death or even like in chap 146/147 when the MC got stuck in a dark maze, a claustrophobic person might die of heart attack in that situation. Will there be some real world problem the developer will face if the 'game' is truly just a game?
Hi author, First I love the premise of the book and if executed correctly can be one of the best. However on of the things I have noticed is your writing pattern of “I turned away and I walked toward…” or sentences along those lines starting with “I *action*”. While there is nothing wrong with this grammatically, when trying to make your writing more interesting, it can be a detriment. There are a couple of paragraphs where every sentence begins with I did this… and this happened. A great way to spice up your writing would be to add in complex sentences such as “Turning away from Hus, I walked toward the gate with Howard and Luke.” It sounds better than “I turned away from Hus and I walked toward the gate…” Not sure if this is just an early chapter problem of you getting a feel for your writing style, but it could definitely help! Thanks for the great novel!
Author Author!! Hear me out. I love the book it's wonderfully made. But can u just make the harem love the MC but he doesn't reciprocate those feels but chooses one uniquely amazing girl there please. Isn't it a win-win situation for those who love harem and those u don't but love the story, it's the best of both worlds. Mmm😉😉
