IGotStones
La historia 4/5, el romance 2/5 (usaste todo los cliche posibles y el carácter del MC cambiaba demasiado, y Anna la diste vuelta como un panqueque en actitud así porque si), el tecnicismo.... heee vamos a ponerle 5/5 (me entretuvo bastante), el corte a los capítulos 1000/5 hiciste que una comida en burgenking fuera más de 10 capítulos y lo peor es que estas alargando y alargando cada ves más diciendo el mismo párrafo simplemente cambiando el contexto ( como por ejem, ahí un burro en la montaña y después pones en otro párrafo que la montaña sostiene a un burro y después te pones a explicar como la gravedad afecta al burro y la suposición de cómo el burro subió la montaña) [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...Nice story...
Okay. So i just finished chapter 25 .and it was dope. the story is pretty engaging and it made me want to keep reading. and the backstory of a few characters is dope like the author didn't need to go into details about certain things and they did and i really enjoyed it. a few things that catches me off guard is the transition between certain character POV. or just going into quick flashback scenes. these aren't that bad. just slight things i think the author could improve on. but it is their writing style. oh. also like the dates and time at the beginning of each chapter. that actually might help me more if i actually read them all the time. but i do love the story. and i need to catch up before i do another review. as stated just finished chapter 25
Oh my god, this just got annoying from a long time ago . Author-san, the story is very good and cannot wait to see where Wiatt will ho with all his romances, but just getting to read this kind of chapters every single day is like reading little pieces of nothing! For the love of god I could jump 20 chapters of this novel ( perhaps even more ) and the amount of information I would be messing is close to nothing. Doing that would be like fast forwarding a video just to still arrive to nowhere. I am sorry is I sound rude or disrespectful with this comment and my intention is not to be so , even less to tell a person how he/she should do things never the less write his/her novel, but common Author-san, this is to much for someone’s patience.