Barbare
Well, first off, please keep in mind that I'm not going to judge yours or anyone's grammar! Because I believe that If I can't even straighten my own grammar, then I don't have any right to straighten other's grammar. So please don't expect a grammar advise from me except using Grammarly, LOL! Your writing is so smooth that before I knew it I already read the whole thing! Well, the start feels like Sung-Jin-Woo of Solo Leveling then he became Hajime Nagumo from Arifureta, LOL! If you know what I mean? Well, you can just search Arifureta in google if you didn't get me. Back on topic! Definitely the ruthless guy, all right. What comes next after the ruthless guy? Of course, harem, LOL!!! Well, joking aside, having a ruthless main character is becoming cliche and too typical nowadays. It's still 8 chapters so I hope his character development will be wide and he will be polished as a unique main character. Overall, this a nice and easy to read novel. The story is refreshing but the main character is still cliche, for now that is. I know he's still going to be polished. I don't have much to say since I'm not really a good editor so my only advise to you as a fellow author is.. as long as someone is still reading, don't ever drop it! If you're really sure that no one is reading anymore, you can drop it, It's up to you now. But if someone, even one is still reading, don't drop it!
Rating:5/5 Lazar is now my new bf đ. His character is refreshing. The scenes we're detailed. They come alive as I read. I don't care about the genre (it's not my cup of tea). I did not even notice, because it is well written. Chapter release is consistent too. I also like how the story develops in each chapter. There is nothing for me to point out as a flaw. Aside from my perfect rating of 5, I also give you a two thumbs up. Great job. Cheers!!
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